Reviews for Howling Dark
Dasgun chapter 1 . 8/28
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Brother Jack chapter 15 . 6/1
You, my friend, brought about a story I didn't even know needed to be written and you did it exceptionally well. I dare say this story deserves a sequel, no demands one! You, my friend, deserve high praise for not only making no grammar mistakes but also for making this story capture a reader's attention and keeping it. I am proud to say that this is amongst my top 10 favorite stories I've ever read and I'm proud to say you, my friend, deserve all the praise for this. Well done, I look forward to your future books. So long and may Reach forever shine in the history books as the first stand against the Covenant.
Louis chapter 15 . 4/7
Wow.

Wait...PART 1?

There’s GOING TO BE MORE?

Yes plz.
BuddhaBuddha chapter 15 . 3/20
Good story.
r4d6 chapter 15 . 3/9
I really liked this story and can't wait for The Next War.
FoxMcCloud chapter 14 . 3/2
So in this story Six was created in a laboratory? Spartans 3 are supposed to have been orphans recruited by ONI, promising them power and revenge against the Covenant.

Although knowing Ackerson, he would be willing to do anything to defeat Halsey in her own game.

THIS WAS A VERY GOOD HISTORY!
GoldLion777 chapter 14 . 2/18
Now that Six is going to live in the 21st century as a civilian, he will need a last name. It would be great if he took the last name Ackerson since James was the closest thing to a father that Six had. Ackerson was for the Spartan III what Halsey was for the Spartans II.
earendil18 chapter 15 . 2/15
For UNSC guns as NPs, yeah, Spartans still use generic weapons they easily discard. They have some weapons custom made for them like the M6D magnums which were upsized to facilate use by Spartans in MJOLNIR and the M11 Combat Knives made in hyperdense and which have a balde of 365.8 millimeters in length and weighs 2 kilograms (the lenght of the average battleworthy zweihander) (vs the 20 cm long blade in high carbon steel with titaniul coating used by unaugmented soldier). But even Kelly's custom crafted Oathsworn shotguns are easily and often abandonned on the battleground to be remplaced later.

The exception are Jorge's modified machine gun and the custom-crafted SRS99-S5 AM sniper rifle that Linda one day stole and named Nornfang and that she kept and modified and handtuned over the years, notably to synchronize it with her HUD. And I suppose Emile's Kukri.
Mr Nail chapter 15 . 2/15
I'm glad to have read this story from beginning to end, it was definitely a great read to come to these past few months. Honestly I'm looking forward to how things'll play out in your next story!

Also: Congrats on being the first writer to finish a FateXHalo fic! I wish you good luck on the next part, and I'm glad to have read this Roach99 ;)
HeyMrJack chapter 15 . 2/15
Holy shit.
This has been a trip and reading this fic through twice has made it even better.
I feel like I don't deserve the shoutout, but thank you for it, Roach. This fic has been great to read and I'm glad I got to read it.
Congrats on being the first to complete their FateXHalo fic btw lmao
Either way, this fic has been a wonderful trip and I'm glad to have read it. I can't wait for The Next War to come soon! You're a terrific writer man, and this has been a wonderful journey and I think the rest of your readers would agree.
Much love to you man.
dilangp1999 chapter 15 . 2/15
First of all, this was a great story! As you mentioned, it was not perfect story, but it was something very entertaining to read and it does leave you wanting to know how the story will continue. I also think that you are the first person to ACTUALLY FINISH a crossover between Halo and Fate on this page, that is an achievement that you should be proud of.

I'm not sure how the fact that Six is a counter guard works, I thought Alaya had to make a deal with you to condemn you to be a glorified butler, cleaning humanity's disasters for the rest of the eternity, and I don't know what she could have offered Six.

One concept that you could use for the sequel is that the Spartans are the manifestation of humanity's subconscious desire to return to being the heroes they once were, during the Age of the Gods and the Age of Fairies. wanting to recover their essence they once lost, wanting to improve themselves to return to be the champions that hundreds or thousands of years ago they were, trying to recreate those heroes through technology having lost the mystery long ago.

Proof of that is the fact that the Spartans are the closest thing to the heroes of yesteryear that humanity has had since the Age of Man began.

well as I mentioned before this was a great story and I will look forward to the sequel, I wish you good luck in everything and until next time ;)
sawtooth44 chapter 15 . 2/15
i wonder what will be SIX's reaction to discovering HALO: Combat Evolved and wait...
*checks google and dose some research*
according to google (and worked out with my own logic) ski resorts only open up when the snow season starts, the first one i saw being open on the 29th of November and the first episode of Today's Menu for Emiya Family takes place after the grail war (Good ending of UBW) in other words 31st of December 2004

Halo 2 releases if by my research is right at the earliest on the VERY MONTH the 5th grail war begins with November 9th 2004 being the release of Halo 2 and the grail war starting on the 29th
Jrambo710 chapter 15 . 2/15
Great story !
Starlord Master chapter 15 . 2/15
It was fun to read this. I liked the use of metaphors.
Lord of Moons chapter 15 . 2/15
To be honest, my largest complaint is MJOLNIR. Mine of the other servants need large amounts of Prana to simply use armour and weapon noble phantasms. And MJOLNIR shouldn't be that significant a noble phantasm if at all. He only received it along with noble team in 2551. And it's literally just expensive armour not a legendary weapon. Granted expensive for future space age civilisation, but still rather mundane and something exceeded by later generations. Making it a noble phantasm would only make sense if he had a legend to it, such as using armour abilities in an extreme way, or never taking it off.

It just feels thematically off for a suit that's self-sufficient for up to 15 years to only be summoned for minutes at a time. As for weapons, there are Spartan only weapons in the books, and the Spartan laser seems like it should be there. And false assassin didn't have a noble phantasm weapon, but still was summoned with his katana. It feels off so to speak.

Though in the end I can see your reasons.
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