I like the premise of the story, but the lack of characterisation grated on my nerves. Elena's change from self centered party girl to whatever it is she became isn't very believable.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not writing this to he a dick, but I feel the story set up was good and the ending didn't deliver.

She spent her time infuriating Damon, nothing about their encounters could be considered as sexual tension, so when he says he wants to ravish her, it feels cheap, because we're supposed to just agree he's into her because Canon Damon is.

It's just... it was very unsatisfying for me.

Another of your stories added to my favourites list. Just loved it. Thank you for the gifts you've given us.

Thanks for the story. It's a nice one.

Wow! Finally I had a little bit of time to finish reading this story.
Fantastic! Loved it a lot. Thank you! :-)

I don't know how this escaped me. I was cleaning out my inbox and found this gem. I love how original and unique it is.

Thanks for the story. It's a nice one.

Nice! Would love to see multiple chapters and see where this goes.

I really like the way you two tell a story. I always seem to connect with your Delenas. Thanks for continuing their stories.

One word. Comes to mind: Enchanting.
Thanks for another one.

Wow. Crazy fun story. Thanks to both of you.

I loved that they didn't fall all over each other right away. Really cute story.

I'm kind this wrapped up where it did. I like how mature they were with each acknowledging their own personal faults. No running away anymore and that they want to work on them - together.

I want more!

This was one hell of a read. Loved it entirely.
Who wouldn't fall for hot-doc, also pro with a chainsaw Damon lol
I liked John in this one too.

Why don't you have Stefan in your stories? Just curious.

Thanks for this OS. It was so much fun to read.
Have a good day.

Found this story by fluke. As wonderful as always. Thank you Eva and Carol.

Fantastic spin on the fairytale. Great job.