I love this story! It's truly very good work and I'm glad we got the romance early on instead of a slow burn. Also, I love how you started out with a forced, rushed and generally problematic relationship in a troubled time and showed us how it turned into a healthy and happy marriage because of the effort all three participants put in it. Also, I lovedvthe final fight, it wasn't overwhelming but it wasn't underwhelming either. Great story overall.

That was an awesome story. Some of those chapters had my stomach in knots so I had to take breaks because it was so emotional. I love the ending, that’s so cute that Draco is the twin’s godfather, and so sweet! Thank you for writing this story!

wow your story is awesome!
usually fanfic about twin weasley and hermione often feel awkward, cos I feel they like brother and sister, but your fanfic have good chemistry between them. love it!

I can tell, the way you kill voldy more satisfying than JKR way. well done! X

This look interesting to read

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Love this ending! I stumbled upon this fic on a fluke and I am so glad I did:)

You use English much better than half of the English-speakers I know.

Awesome story. Thank you

I read this all day. It's so cute!

This story was so adorable, amazing and sweet. I loved the interaction between the protagonists, their ups and downs, the portrayal of the lack of trust in one's loved one and the world that can easily be when one has been in crisis and some terrible pain. All in all a fantastic good story.
This goes straight to my favorite list.

Holy shit! English is not your native language! You gotta be shitting me! That's... That's... Incredible! I tip my hat to you!

This was a spectacular story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

loved this!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Tore through the whole thing in a few hours and it was brilliant. Your use of English is above and beyond a fair few stories I've read from native speakers, the only tip offs being a lack of contractions in conversation (just a bit formal for the twins) and the misplaced use of plop to describe apparition but that may be intentional. Personally it makes me think of a wet towel hiring the ground instead of the sharper "crack" described in the books but perhaps I'm being nitpicky; I certainly hope it doesn't come across as harsh because your writing is very very good. This is a wonderful twin story with a great plot and good pacing. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to reading more of your writing! Danke schön