This was so good! I love that the realisation of her identity wasn't immediate, it made it so much more realistic. And Aslan! I didn't think he'd appear in this story, honestly, but he fits here well.
As much as I love this story and wish it wouldn't end soon, I do hope you update soon so we can find out what happens

Woohoo finally! And what an epic fight :) I hope Roan gets what’s coming to him for being such a weasel

Oo was the roaring Aslan?

Yesss! It’s starting to pick up! Hope Susan gets her memory back soon

I hope you don’t mind some constructive criticism but I have to say it feels like the story is dragging. Personally, I feel there isn't really enough conflict to keep my interest or rather the conflict you gave us (Susan losing her memory) doesn’t work on its own. I like what your doing with the lord and his romantic pursuit of Susan though will possible ulterior motives. But again, we’re 16 chapters in.

Aww! Cuteness overload :) do you have a timeline estimate of when Susan will regain her memories? Like if it’s soon or there’s multiple chapters until or such

Awww yay For Anna/Susan! Hopefully she can get her memories back soon :) also, Roan sketches me out so I’m waiting for him to top the scale or something

Well, this could get complicated very quickly!

I have to admit, I kind of want to begin a story with, "You see, first it was the bandits that started it all." That's a great line.

Can’t wait to see where you go with this! Keep up the great work!