Ahhhhhhhh! I got so excited when I saw you updated! I LOVE THIS! It's so amazing. I read it all in their voices and the dialogue is literally perfect. This is so good. Like I love Richard and Connie's platonic dynamic and this is just amazing to me haha. Can't wait for more! (Also I must catch up on "The Second Coming" soon because I'm a few chapters behind.)

Ooh! I loved this! So well-written! I loved the mention of Timmy, too. I can't wait for more! :) I wonder how Blackgaard will react when he finds out Connie was re-hired.
Also, nice seeing ya on the Rydell Saga livestream! I, too, can't wrap my head around it all, but it's exciting. :P

Oooh! I really enjoyed this! It was super good, as always!

I love this so much! I can't wait for more!

I don't usually review fanfictions, but I have never been as blown away by a fanfiction as this one. Particularly the fourth chapter. The story's direction was one that I had not anticipated and it was very well done! Consistently throughout these heart-pounding four chapters are the characters written magnificently. I could hear the voices of the characters as I read their lines. The authenticity to the characters is something that a lot of fanfictions don't quite grasp. You do. And although I spotted a couple of grammatical errors, they were few and far between and forgettable considering the story's quality content. I especially loved the scene in the first chapter where Blackgaard uses manipulation to hire Connie. Considering that he is a 'child psychologist' that was a perfect way to not only bewilder and trick Connie, but to write Blackgaard. Bravo!
I am a sucker for Richard Maxwell, so I always enjoy hearing from him. I love the way you write him.
The story itself is suuuper great and believable.
One thing I'm curious about. . . will Lucy come into play or will Blackgaard and Richard discard her because they have Connie to find the password of Applesauce?
I felt so much adrenaline reading it and just wow! Sorry for being so wordy... But seriously, thank you so much for this story! It brightened my day, truly.

I think my brain just burst! I wasn't expecting the chapter to go as I did and I LOVE it! I seriously cannot wait for more! Thank you for writing this!

This is SO GOOD! Your setting and characterization are so spot-on. Can't wait to read more!

I was so excited to see you updated! Ahhhh! I can't get enough of this story! Thank you so much for writing it! You are so good at capturing the characters' personalities, too, especially Connie.

YAY! You updated! This is so, so good! I love your writing :) I can't wait for more!

I love this SO MUCH! The writing is so good that I can hear the characters reading their dialogue. Thank you for gracing the AIO fandom with your writing! Keep up the good work!

I've often wondered what would happen if Connie chose the other path. I'm enjoying reading this so far and looking forward to where you take this!

This is AMAZING! I can hear every line in the characters' voices. The tension is masterfully done and the writing is great! Whether or not it remains a one-shot, I LOVE it. I love the concept of it, too! Really amazing!

Please continue! This is really good, and I'm intrigued by this alternate universe.