Reviews for Lie |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 This one shot was fabulous, and I felt captured a LOT about Fleur and Bill both as people, and as a couple. Firstly, I think this really captured Bill's love, and caring side for Fleur, and the fact that he loves her so much he'd practically do anything for her. And I also love how at the end, in just six words, you express Fleur's side of the relationship. She's doubtful, and insecure, and doesn't entirely trust men to love her for anything but her looks. Something I think someone like Fleur would have, and it was very deep of this piece to capture that - and in just six words. |
Lizzysobebear chapter 1 . 8/4/2009 I get chills whenever I read this! It's just so beautiful and melancholy. Great job! |
Wotcher-Tonks chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 so sad... |
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 3/14/2008 This is beautiful. I wish Fleur believed him though. |
Dishonorable chapter 1 . 12/15/2007 Haunting, one of my absolute favorites of your work. |
you're my Star chapter 1 . 12/4/2007 Interesting light on their relationship. I really liked it - and now I'm favorting. That's all I have to say. :] |
Yokel chapter 1 . 1/31/2006 This is my favorite of all the things you've written. I know that seems unlikely, considering that LSET is absolutely brilliant, but I love this fic because its so true, and really makes you wonder about bill and fleur's relationship. |
The Atomic Cafe chapter 1 . 9/23/2005 Wow. You manage to convey something so powerful in so few words. I see really see that happening, really. Fleur's beautiful, and I can only try to imagine Bill ignoring that completely. Well done. - Dim |
Sciens Mulier chapter 1 . 7/22/2005 I've never liked really super-short fics...but this one fits perfectly. It is well-written, the ending is a jolt-how sad! An interesting take on the relationship...good job! |
ffaddix chapter 1 . 10/8/2004 truly chilling and beautiful |
Little Red Rabbit chapter 1 . 4/22/2004 Aw... I love it!... poor Fleur... |
Mornings Light chapter 1 . 4/5/2004 That's a really great one-shot, well written and not too ambiguous. Well done! |
Panda-Monium chapter 1 . 11/27/2003 Short, but oh so sweet bill and Fleur fic. Leaves a taste in your mouth. Superbwriting ~Panda-Monium |
superfunkybeatgirl chapter 1 . 10/6/2003 Beautiful. I love short stories like this that explore characters or relationships. Your style is wonderful: very elegant and poetic. Poor Fleur ... guys only see her as a sexual object. Have you read 'J'ai demandé à ma mère' by Elektra3? It's an amazing short story about Fleur, I highly recommend it. |
Jeru chapter 1 . 10/3/2003 I could say that is lovely, but that will be the thrut I could say that is a great fic, but that will b the thruth |