Okay this is freaking amazing, you should continue this when you can as it’s great. Few things you can make it better though.

First get a beta or three, they freely volunteer for such things here on FFnet and it’ll help your readers out a bunch.

Second I’m not sure about her getting new tails, that’s more a Fox thing in Japanese myth rather than a wolf. Maybe to signal her getting new powers she can get new markings on her body instead? Like on her hands and arms or something. Maybe even a symbol on her tail for each new brush god she creates?

Um her past viewing didn't work on the thugs?

This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more!

why are all Okami Worm fanfictions so amazing?

because I think these crossovers are blessed by Amaterasu herself, they are just that incredible.

keep up the good work and may whatever you write continue to be amazing.

Feels like english is not your narive language.
Too long sentences and too big paragraphs, its just hard to read. And not enough commas, imo.

I think I just broke the fave butten

change "I don't have either the Corona nor the Gamma"
into either "I have neither the Corona nor the Gamma"
or "I don't have either the Corona or the Gamma".
(the former is easier to read, but both are valid).

it's accept, not except
it's damn, not damm

"too" is used for emphasis, "to" is used for connection.
Examples: "I'm too tired", "too bad", "took too long", "from point A to point B", "vented to", "came to".

i love the story, but...
it's month, not mouth
it's put, not but
it's exercise, not exorcise

it's father, not farther
it's definitely, not defiantly.

Fun cross, wish I had played the game more though... I think I just watched a cousin play a bit one holiday...

thanks. I'm looking forward to reading more

plane Worm

Weird OOC people, cartoon logic, mental rants and stilted conversations

great great