Reviews for The Supreme King and his Queen of Grimm
Crossoverlover242 chapter 4 . 9/8
Nice
avjuan37 chapter 3 . 8/24
please make more chapters
cryo threshold chapter 4 . 5/25
For Mindy's deck i would say an Invoked Charmer deck (using the archetypes Invoked/Invoked Beast and the charmer archetype).
RedDemonEye chapter 4 . 5/25
I'm surprised there isn't more fanfictions like this so far I'm really enjoying this and what kind of man jaune has become and its awesome that you doing things differently but yet the same it gives more life to the story itself and gives more character development I can't wait to see what happened on remnant and how things have changed and will change when the two worlds meet so keep up the good work and like always have a nice day.
calderoneric758 chapter 4 . 5/24
Two things why not that big chick that syrups faced and have mana join jaune or something also will they visit remnant at all say season 3 or season 4
Zathol chapter 4 . 5/24
Everyone a moment of silence for all characters who eventually fade into the background and only make tiny reappearances with little to no significance.
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Well least got something to look forward to right? Take your time. Building decks and stories and making chapters out of yugioh duels seems a bit challenging. I can iamgine unless you just copy the cards in the show and the overall story then no big deal but if you are planing your own story with entirly unique decks. Well that is quite some work planing each turn for the game. And that isn't even bringing in the character interaction.

Least the three girls are interesting. Definitely a three for one deal they are. Can't separate these harpy sisters. Jaune you lucky guy you.
Sage of the Azure Phoenix chapter 4 . 5/24
Not bad, since both decks describe Jasmine to the letter.

Glad to see Mindy and Jasmine finally getting spotlight, however don't forget Missy, Princess Rose, Seika, Disa from the Tag Force games, Blair, and Ekou.

For Mindy's deck, I vote Buster Blader/Destruction Sword, sans Buster Dragon, unless you have a way to turn it into a Fusion monster.

I'm also curious if Jaune's past will come back to insert itself into his life, because it would be hilarious seeing how Teams RWBY, NPR, and CFVY would react.
Zebralord23 chapter 2 . 3/9
Zarc is the true baddie of Arc-V and his card, as he is a duel monster, is Supreme King ZARC and he has a whole archetype called the Supreme King Servants. The dude probs forgot that in GX there is the Supreme King of Gentle Darkness.
Mace sheperd chapter 1 . 12/23/2019
I just saw your reply and i responded myself!
Neo-Warkid4 chapter 3 . 11/18/2019
so if Midori from the Manga is going to be included, does that mean Reggie and Seika will be in the story too?

here's some advice for your next chapters.

- have Jasmine and Mindy be proper duelists with actual decks like in the Tag Force Games, Harpie Deck for Jasmine and a Beast Stall Deck Based on Dark Snake Syndrome for Mindy

- don't have the Jaune vs Alexis duel be based on fake love letter blackmail, Jaune wouldn't be as forgiving as Jaden would if he learned the girl who claimed to be a good obelisk took Syrus hostage and used him to force him into a duel where both of them would be expelled if he lost (even though Alexis admitted afterward she wouldn't have done it anyway if she won), when she KNEW they were set up by a fake invitation. Jaune would lose his trust in the Obelisk girls and believe Alexis is worse than Chazz because she lied to them about being a nice Obelisk student and exploited them both to have a duel. plus equipping Fusion Weapon to Cyber Blader is an illegal move because Fusion weapon can only be equipped to Fusion Monsters LV 6 or lower.

- If you're going to include Blair, make her age 15 with a LV monster or Lightsworn deck like in the Tag Force games

- Have Jaune be aware of and address the fact that all the girls happen to be in Obelisk Blue, one of the primary flaws with GX is no one seems to address this blatant sexism in Duel Academy, it's like they're trying to say, Girls don't work as hard as Boys do. a proper Duel Academy should have girls be allowed in ALL THREE DORMS!, Blair being in Slifer Red should not be the exception, but the rule.

Please PM me for your response
shadic chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
a really interesting story with jaune I really have to say really exciting I've thought though because syrus comes together with blair and mana comes together with jaune but I'm curious how the story continues
Guest chapter 3 . 11/17/2019
Harem Girl candidates: Elemental Heroes Burstinatrix, Elemental Hero Lady Heat, Elemental Hero Poison Rose, Elemental Hero Shadow Mist, Camula, Blair, Evil Hero Inferno Wing, Evil Hero Nemesis, Female Aster Phoenix, Female Jessie Anderson, , Professor Fontaine, Sarina, Princess Rose, and Alice.
Skull Flame chapter 3 . 11/17/2019
This was a good interlude. I'll be waiting to see more. I didn't expect to see Midori Hibiki though.
the-lost-memories6 chapter 3 . 11/16/2019
Like it keep up the good work
When is jaunes past gonna come up to his friends
crocodilesmile55 chapter 3 . 11/16/2019
Please go back to your rwby ed edd n eddy crossover story I really like that story I couldn't stop laughing when i read the first chapter.
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