Reviews for White Lies
Arcanos chapter 2 . 5h
yeah...u r doing great...I don't really write long winded reviews, but try to leave one short at least... so... the story is good... eager to see your take on PoS... especially how draco changes dynamic...am also eager about GoF and more specifically Yule ball to be honest...
princessplupin chapter 2 . 7/31
great idea! looking forward to the nextel chap
jona chapter 2 . 7/6
I love the idea of Harry winning the Dursleys round somewhat, and then not knowing what to do with their interest. so cute. I'm quite enjoying your whistle-stop year summaries, but I wouldn't mind a bit more fleshing out of the story. I am interested to see what twists you have planned. Also, I very much agree with your feelings on book 2!
Nothing chapter 2 . 4/28
I really hope you update soon. It's a good story.
Lady Nyshah chapter 2 . 4/27
Absolutely love it. Hoping for more
Nargelz chapter 1 . 4/25
Tbh I’m confused too but I like it
Calindy chapter 2 . 4/5
Enjoyed! I love the progression!
Calindy chapter 1 . 4/5
This is funny! Thanks!
gudino chapter 2 . 3/22
please make more soon
boo63 chapter 2 . 3/14
Just found this gem of a story and I am really impressed with how you write. You have also come up with a couple of ideas I hadn't come across before, the white lie at the beginning and the interaction with the Dursleys in this manner. I loved what Hermione did about Lockhart. The relationship between all the characters is very entertaining and I am very much looking forward to the rest of the story.
MySongsKnowWhatYouDidInTheDark chapter 2 . 3/2
I really love what you are doing! It's interesting and I honestly cannot get enough of it! I completely agree with the second book being too heavy. The flow is so natural that it seems like it could have been like this. It involves thought in a meaningful way. Thank you for sharing this lovely story. I hope you're doing well!
Loughlan chapter 2 . 2/1
i like this story hope you update soon
General Cammy chapter 2 . 1/4
good so far
Jaely chapter 1 . 12/21/2019
You know that was a really interesting way to go about getting the Dursleys to begin to care about Harry. Even if they don’t particularly like the magic part, they are slowly including him into their family (as an actual member) just as Harry is slowly including them into his magical world. I think that was something that didn’t happen between Petunia and Lily when they were children. Lily went off to this magical school and never thought to find ways to include Petunia and her parents in the world she was learning about, which made Petunia bitter and completely isolated. Leading her to blame magic and the magical world for stealing her sister from her.

So great job on thinking of a way to bridge that gap in a logically realistic way. I am really looking forward to reading more of this story.
LadyWillowElf chapter 2 . 12/17/2019
I like this story!
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