Love it!

My Goodness... You are a WICKED girl! Here I was thinking...YES... Luke’s going to be alright!... NOT! Before I was so Blown Away by the “CLIFFHANGER”... I thought the conversation between Luke and Leia was very heartwarming and so honest. Their confessions of their mistakes and their realization of their natural bond was authentic. The conversation and confrontation between Leia and Vader so powerful. Leia pouring out her feeling was familiar to Vader for it was just like he had poured his feeling to Padme and Obiwan. His feeling of Obiwan holding him back! His feeling of the Jedi Council NOT trusting him! His feeling of jealousy he often felt when it came to Padme! Leia is without a doubt his daughter... a so natural in the Force. It seemed to have changed Vader’s view on giving her some training. I am going to keep myself hopeful that Luke will be found. If and when Luke gets found... there is going to HELL to pay from the Sith Lord.. Darth Vader! Thanks for the update... as SHOCKING as it is.. it’s still an awesome story. Please stay safe! Stay Strong! :D

love this story, please update soon!

Hello! thank you for the update! But... you wanna kill me, right? What a hangcliff is that? My heart is not gonna make it until the end! You were really mean to the boy! He is actually hurt enough, isnt he? And now he is captured?! Nooooo! That means that daddy wont find him anytime soon? Dont do this to us! It seems to me you prefer writing about Vader and Leia interaction, but Vader and Luke stories are soo nice. Pleeease, let Vader find him in the next chapter! Poor boy! Cheers, good work!

Noooo!

Nice Cliffy. And this is going to be SO good when Sith Dad and pi$$ed off Rebel commander sis come barging in. The good thing, if you can call it that, is that there isn't much more they can do to Luke unless they heal him first. I mean, they could try torturing him but he'd likely die from one good slap at this point. Maybe...tickle him for a while...tell him bad jokes. That't probably the only torture he could take without passing away... : / Poor kid.

When Vader gets there he is gonna burn that place to the ground!

Is this a "Finding Luke" story with lots of drama and (unneccessary) cruelty towards our beloved protagonist on the way or is there a story after the Skywalkers are united?
Because this reader honestly tires of obstacle after obstacle after obstacle...
I'd rather read a story of mending family (a little meandering towards that goal is fine), but if it's not, I'd rather know sooner than later and look elsewhere :)

I really loved this chapter, in particular the scene with Leia and Vader. Their interaction was on point. Well done.

You really are a mean person to Luke... I think that restraining order will be the last of your worries because if Luke does go dark side then I'm pretty sure you'll be near the top of the list of people he will kill 1st... That being said I love to the chapter.

Holy heck and just when I thought Luke was gonna get some help-

This is going in my mental list of best story chapters

Oh, thank you very much for updating. This chapter was so entertaining! Cant wait for the next one!

Indeed Leia is Firecracker! Making a whole lot of noise which begins with a fire spark. As for Luke... the poor guy is just out of luck. To get pick pocketed by “Beek Monkeys”... and left without any food source... DAMM! As for Vader... he’s coming to the realization that he has little to no control over his kids... especially his daughter. Even Luke has decided that He would fear Leia over Vader.. The Skywalkers sure have a lot of issues they have to work out... Unfortunately it will have to wait until overcome their obstacles. I truly like how you have taken the time to set the feel for the story. Giving Leia and Vader time to establish a relationship. Giving Luke some time to begin to trust and see Vader as his father. Thanks for the update. I appreciate your dedication to readers like me. I hope you are well. Please Stay Safe. ;)

Thanks for the update! Leia is totally goals and way scarier than Vader.