This is so awesome :) I really love Lloyd and Garmadon's relationship in this... I could get used to that.

Aww

Umm... there's a part that you got wrong. Even when he was the Ice Emperor, Zane hesitated to kill, and he only froze his enemies in corrupt ice. When the Staff of Forbidden Spinjutzu is destroyed, everyone that's been frozen are free.

Great Story! Really cute and beautiful !