Reviews for In Another Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm crying. This is amazing. Also, I need to count the amount of times I've cried in lockdown. It's probs a huge number cos before lockdown I didn't know what fanfiction is XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The kitchen scene gave me matrix vibes, and Caroline made a pretty good oracle. Overall though, I enjoyed this fic a lot! It's hard to overstate my satisfaction :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Caroline talking about the scientists who killed her, or the Newells? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet ending! Overall, this was a magnificent story, especially for a first fanfic. The characters were well developed and the pacing was great. I didn't spot many (if any) typos. It was decently put together and well written. Looking forward to what you work on next! |
![]() ![]() Could you make a doug x cell fic or doug x GLaDOS? Please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alex could feel all the cores? Also, good job on finding closure for the events of the original Portal. No matter what her reasons, Chell was still killing those robots, and I've been meaning for her to have to face that about herself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was intense! I’m actually tearing up a little bit now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeee! That was so cooooool! Oh, man! What a twist for the whole Chell/Alex debockle. I did not see that coming. I'm so proud of them all! Can't wait to see how this is going to end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh no, Alex is in the mainframe isn't she? Wheatley! Help her keep it together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoooo boy. Here we go into the endgame. This chapter was really good with the buildup. Like I said before, you're really good with the proportion of how much story in how much chapter so there's never a dull moment. I'll be waiting in anticipation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! Did NOT see that one coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh geez, not good not good not good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing the family facing Aperture together was an awesome, almost Incredibles like moment. Oh and She's there too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The prototype Chassis! Also, wow, Caroline is much better at traps. Probably just a chapter away from the obligatory Moron Montage. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you didn't use either Sophie's or Alex's names in this chapter, bit you could still tell who you were talking about. Oh yeah, and who's idea was it to go down into Aperture without telling the adults? I'm not going to call it moronic, but... *cough cough* |