This is glorious!

Whyyyyyyyyyy?

I do find it funny these critics united bs. "read the rules!" well obviously he has and still done it. There are a bunch of other stories that "break" the rules but all these people criticing this one are spineless cowards going after smaller writers so they can feel like they actually matter since they don't in real life.

Tell me something kid, is English even your first language? I suggest getting a dictionary and re-read the site rules and guidelines. Those exists for a reason.

Please don't stop this story because of these dumb regulations, if they kick you off the site just post it somewhere else and let us know where it is.

I actually don't be believe you got cucked like that. It's actually so stupid... I saw this said once already, and I agree with the idea - try out Space battles or Space Velocity. 99% sure the mods there would be OK with this sorta thing.

Wonderful story. As always, fuck the spineless dweebs at Critics United, and fuck everything they stand for. Go to SpaceBattles or Sufficient Velocity if you want to be a pretentious cunt about fanfiction, you fucking losers.

This story is awesome, even if you did the change the names around to appease these effete dorks.

Just so you know, using real people as characters in your story is not allowed on this site per the Rules & Guidelines we all have to agree to before we can go post stories. Making a parody of their name is a quick and easy fix for this problem. Take these suggestions into consideration, as they will help you avoid issues with the rules in the future. Bear in mind, failure to comply with these rules puts your story and your account at risk of being deleted and suspended by the admins of this site. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant.

Best,
Zad
Critics United

All I can say to this story is yes.

The thing is. George W. Bush is still very much alive. I'm very sure he (or is family) wouldn't appreciate a fanfic being written about him. Would you? Now if this story is rewritten so that it has a fictional former American President then you wouldn't have a problem with site admins or worse, legal ramifications. If Mr. Bush wanted to, then he could press legal charges against this site or just the author.

Holy shit! I thought it was going to be crack, but it's not. What a welcome surprise!

I really want to see where you go with this, especially because the POTUS can't just go around doing cool stuff all the time. (physically, at the very least)

I love this so much, it is such a unique read! I'm really looking forward to what happens next, great work wasabi!

I know that Bush is a historical figure. I’m saying that no one really cares if using historical figures is allowed or not, which is why they do it anyway

:o

Not a review I'm justhere to argue that as almost twenty years have passed I say George W. counts as a historical figure by now.