I am happy to see your new update. I must say that you got the scene of the rats running away with the electric cable while Chris has been watching them and the detachment from when Chris arrives, then sees them and returns to Frisby / brisby (I read the book don't mind if I write it like this ). and came fluidly and masterfully. The next chapter the Great Owl there I will be curious about the dialogue of the trio .. and another thing but I will tell you about it for PM.
I will not be looking forward to your next update.

Christopher was so brave to wanted to help his new friends,

I bet that his parents would be so proud of him if they can see him have a brave hero

Excellent chapter and I must say that it must not be easy to adapt the film and book to add your idea of history. I must say that the relationship between Chris and Brisby is very interesting. renew the compliments and I will look forward to your new neighbor in time to update.
I wonder if it will also explain how he made that Blue pendant to be where Chris had found it and a thought that still turns on my head and that should be important point.
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I'm surprise when see story. i Like Brisby and the secrets of Nimh. this story i like it. I can't wait to see how the story develops and between Chris and Brisby. update as soon as possible please.

I wondering why didn’t Chris telling Dragon is he is Dragon’s owner’s nephew ?

That it is so cool and so awesome story characters in the whole world as always .

I am now so excited to see more chapters of this cool story chapters of stories pages .

Very great story so far. Can't wait to find out what will happen next.

I love your story. Update soon.