Oh, no! They did it! I wonder what's gonna happen to Storm now.

One thing I should let you know about, though, is there's a bunch of code in the way that's not supposed to be there. FFN does this all the time.

I really like this so far. Good job, can’t wait to read more! Update soon :)

Uh-oh! Looks like Jackson Storm could be in danger! I'm glad he's reformed, though, but how did it happen? (That's not a criticism in any way; I'm just curious.)

Anyway, I just wanna say I'm definitely interested in this so far.