Reviews for The Disappearance of Emily Potter
bigbossxx6 chapter 7 . 4/13
Beautiful
...just beautiful
Can’t wait for the sequel
solidmentalgrace chapter 7 . 3/5
so... no harry x 2 emilys harem? oh well.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 7 . 3/4
I'M DOING IT ANYWAYS.

GEE HARRY, TWO EMILYS?!
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 6 . 3/4
Quite touching.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 5 . 3/4
Temporal cock-block.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 4 . 3/4
Fricking time travel man.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 3 . 3/4
I'll just let you know ahead of time, if this Delphini sticks around as an adopted but not really situation, I'm going to make a 'Gee Bill, two wieners?!' joke.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 2 . 3/4
Somehow this story slipped the net of updates while I was deployed. Binge engaged.
PieKnight chapter 6 . 3/4
Yes! I've been waiting for an update for this story. Glad to see you've had time to start writing again! Still enjoying the character interactions with Emily, Harry and Delphini.
Frosty123 chapter 1 . 3/4
I'm back, again. And once more, your writing is impeccable. Continue on lad.
SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 3 . 1/18
I'm not sure I really like the path this has gone down since the introduction of Delphini. I very much enjoyed the previous two stories, and appreciate your writing them. They were a fun read! I don't meant to be negative... It just seems like it's been building towards a certain direction for the last 250,000 words, and now it's going in another direction all of a sudden.
heythereman707 chapter 6 . 12/12/2019
Very nice, I like
solidmentalgrace chapter 6 . 12/12/2019
nice chapter. this third book has such a different tone than the first two. almost as if it was written by a different author.
solidmentalgrace chapter 5 . 12/12/2019
hey not sure if you posted two chapters at once or i just didn't get the notification for the 5th chapter but nice
DirtyBee chapter 4 . 12/11/2019
These first 4 chapters have been very entertaining; I look forward to reading the rest!
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