It's not bad. It's enjoyable. The only thing that bugs me about this is the implied incest.

Again I feel Bad for Rita seriously also can't wait for the first Lemon of this story Pal anyway The next chaptsr is bounx to be Awesome and action Packed

awesome job on this chapter and epic way to show Lincoln's powers

I like that Lincoln froze a guy, sliced in half and the other guys were like "we can take him"

Well the sin of pride should be the final and strongest.

Though it would most likely be Lola or Lynn.

nice! but please DON'T make clyde the sin of envy. That would be too heart-wrenching to read.

the girl that she said Lincoln was cute that's thicc QT

Do a harem that consists of Lincoln x Leni x Rita x Lucy I feel like there should be a harem.

A kid as good as Lincoln? No one's perfect. It's not like he did anything bad for the sake of being bad. But maybe story has a plan.

I personally blame of them. Both parents and all sisters. Linc needed some time off from the family, Linc gets PLENTY of exercise keeping the house in order, and his sisters got her banned.

Love this story

Wrath doesn't suit Chandler. Ronnie Anne, or Luna might

Lust: Thicc QT (give up willingly)
Pride: Tetherby (Killed)
Wrath: Chandler (Redeemed, give up)
Gluttony: Either Hank or Hawk (One killed, other escaped)
Sloth: Maggie (Gave up/ Spared after Lincoln proves worth)
Envy: Clyde but was without control (spared after released from torment)

Kill Clyde

Awesome work on this chapter and great fight scene and I hope Lincoln gives Rita a chance