This is great, there's not enough inheritance cycle fanfictions that are written well enough!

Can't wait to read more once you update!
One thing to keep in mind tho, while I love the inheritance cycle, I can admit that it's far from perfect, so don't be too harsh while reading it. Especially considering how old the author was when he wrote it.

I like where the story's going.

Wow that was awesome.

It's really good hope he finds out what he is.