| Reviews for Papa Arc |
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   avjuan37 chapter 3 . 23h please make more chapters |
| avjuan37 chapter 3 . 23h please make more chapters |
| Argus456 chapter 3 . 6/18 This just got really, really weird. I like it! |
| jdoggaming37 chapter 3 . 4/16 I love this story! It’s sad that it hasn’t really been updated tho |
| BulletBooze chapter 1 . 3/23 this is really bad, I will give you credit for trying, but the plot sucks |
| Death The End chapter 1 . 2/6 Ok man, first of all, you really need a beats reader. There are a lot of mistakes and typos that need to be fixed. But this is a decent idea for a fic, I hope it gets better soon. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19 Please continiou this |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2019 Please continiou |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2019 Its a good story but u need to proof check before sending it out some of the sentences don't make sense |
| IROCK108 chapter 3 . 12/14/2019 Very noice. |
| Alvelvnor chapter 3 . 12/13/2019 I saw the dust coming, but I guessed it would hit jaune lol |
| commandosquirrel chapter 3 . 12/13/2019 Who fucked this denser than lead dumbass |
| Hecseferblade chapter 2 . 12/1/2019 I’m loving how this is turning out |
| Genesis1212 chapter 2 . 11/4/2019 Honestly its an interesting take! My only suggestion is you seriously need to clean up that grammar those auto corrects are doing you no justice to this story. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/17/2019 Oh man im loving this XD This is hilarious XD I cant wait to see how he interacts with winter and cinder and even mrs schnee XD Neo and emerald as his kids too? Hoping XD |
