*inhumane screeching* I was like whaaaaaaaa

Geez this book was sooooo good! I love it.

How bittersweet this is. On one hand, it's such a good ending, maybe not satisfying, but that's a very hard thing to do. On the other, it's an ending, 'nuff said.

Overall, I'd put your story as an 8.5/10. Great grammar, great plot, great OC introduction and management, etc. They all lacked in some(very few actually) olaces, but great nevertheless.

And so the curtains start to close. And what a bitter-sweet finale it is. Now for the epilogue.

Nooooo, iiiiittt'sss eeeennnnddddiiiinnnngggg!

Oh, so it's finally being revealed? I wish I hadn't paused for so long now...

Man, this story beckons for the attention it deserves...

And so, the suspense climbs. Ending on a well-done cliffhanger was very effective here.

Such an interesting effect messing with the reader's sense of time in the story produces... I commend you for it, intentional or not.

Well, that's unexpected.

...i was going somewhere with that...

Rigor mortis was an interesting choice of words for Aizawa's stiffness though, any particular reason for it?

I concur.

Did not see that coming. Miss Joke or the end. I may or may not have had to pause at the Miss Joke part for a day or so... But you did well for sure.

Hah! Serves Eraser right at the end of the chapter! And I'm back and ready to catch up on a good story, and boy do I have some catching up to do.

This was beautiful from start to finish. I’m especially intrigued by Paper Cut and his relationship with Rin. It was a pleasure to read and thank you for writing it.

And so it ends, and it ends well as can be. Very, very well done. Exceptionally so, as a matter of fact. Absolutely wondrous piece of writing from start to finish.