Gosh, I can’t believe this is the end. I remember being so excited when I found a well written, planned-to-be-long, regularly updated story for this fandom back when it was only like 3 chapters in. I’m kinda sad that it’s ending, it got me through this crazy year. At the same time, I’m excited for the prequel. Thank you and good luck!

You should do another Keeper Of The Lost Cities fanfic.

This is so amazing!

Yessssss

Ruby, you don’t even need my help! This chapter was amazing, as always!

i'm scared

More knowledge, more knowledge, more knowledge, more knowledge! I’m on the tip of my seat, can’t wait for next week’s chapter!

Great chapter!

The witty banter between characters in the middle of a fight scene is the only way I can generally tolerate fight scenes (at least in movies/TV shows). Thankfully, in written form I can absorb all of the other details around the dialogue and not just be wincing every two seconds. What I’m trying to say is that you write really good fight sequences, so keep it up!

amazing, as always

I must say, I am absolutely delighted at the direction this story has taken the past few chapters. No longer must I resist crying my eyes out, for my wishes have come true! Congratulations on writing a truly amazing story in a fandom that has far too few of them. Good luck for the future and keep writing!

Ooh looks like a long one. Also, what was the chapter title supposed to say? It looks like it got cut off.

Lucine? Am I forgetting one of Alvar’s children or am I just being weird and she’s a new character?

Ok this sounds kinda bad. This is like a fight-to-the-death sort of situation, and she’s playing it off as if it happens every day.

Are the other kids here or is it just Jolie?

OHMYGOSHWAITWHAT- *squeak*

OH MY GOSH WAIT HE’S HERE TOO THE HECK-

I love this chapter so much right now.

wOAH SHE CAN REVIVE PEOPLE
wait but do they stay or do they have to go back...? I really want them to stay...

Ahhhhhhh! Wait, this isn’t the last chapter, right?

Ohhhh she brought the butterfly back to life.

Ok, this can’t be the last chapter. We’ve got a battle to read.

Ok, so I think it would be a good idea to just split it in half. Then it’s not too many segments, but not a super super long chapter.

Wait you’re in America? Huh. I didn’t really expect that.

Ok, so I didn’t get around to reading last night, but I’m here now lol. I’m kinda glad I don’t have to wait a month for chapter 23 (24), in case this ends on a cliffhanger or something. Oh! Also, since I assume you’ve finished your novel, what’s it called? You might have told me already, but you should know by now I’m pretty forgetful.

Oh no. Is Juline going to go bye bye now?

NO THIS IS WORSE NO EDALINE :’( wAIT NO ALDEN AND DELLA!

Ahh no that chapter! I’m happy the next one is out rn.

This one’s also short. And I need to go to bed in like, 10 minutes, so I might get through this chapter, and I might be able to stay up a bit and read some more, but I unfortunately might not get to the last one. We’ll see. Anyways, I’m gonna read now. Oh I also forgot, but good luck with the writing thing.

Well hats one way to start off a chapter. I’m excited and worried now lol. Also Keefe’s writing looks like chicken scratch-

Oh my gosh COUNCIL WHAT THE HECK

i think im going to say publish every week, just because of how much i love this fic