Very nice. First time Naruto used "blue flames" I instantly thought he was somehow using Matatabi's fire. I wonder when Irene will come more into the play.

This story is a nice reprieve from hundreds of Naruto Fanfictions that I have read. It interest me how different this Naruto is from others: selfish, apathetic and mature. Excited for the upcoming chapters, and revelations of Naruto's secrets. What happened to him and Kurama? What are the abilities he's still hiding? And what are his true intentions?

I expect great things from this fic!

I really dig this story, there’s just a few things tho. Respectfully, is English your first language? There’s several lines in and sentences in the story that seem almost out of order and general sayings that are close but wrong. Ex: You say ‘There and there’ a lot, but I’m assuming you mean ‘here and there’. Also, there’s a lot of sections where two sentences should really be one.

It’s obviously not unbearable, I’ve read up until chapter 8 lol. But it would definitely be way more immersive and enjoyable with those small corrections. Good luck with the stories!

I can't begin to explain how much I love your genius... it's truly astounding. I look forward to more

I do not know specifically what this irks me but it does.

''You are cold to my troubles, partner. Maybe we should have died in the face of the Otsutsuki," Naruto said before turning to Ultear. He fear was obvious. He smiled. "Sorry about that. (Let me turn it down a bit for you…) we don't want the little one dying of shock…

(Irks me just irks me.) Let me reign it in, let me tone it down a bit or even I'll cloak my presences so it won't be a bother. Anything but what's written by the author.

Maybe when you have time please check w couple chapters, it's readable no problem just some weird sentences.
Or places where different words maybe better used.
I like the idea just needs some little touches of refinement I would do it if I had plenty of time.
Since I think I am not bad at being a beta and helping maybe correct some little mistakes here and there.
Just sadly no time.

A good chapter like always ,does irene mean that naruto get weaker after he becomes un dragon slayer ? will he be able to use others form of magic without his sword ?

AWESOOOME.

THanks for the update :)

Of course Naruto is the strongest and i swear i want to see Naruto's dragon form XD And i dying want to know what world the sword that Naruto hold of. What happens if his true sword destroy then will Naruto do?

Excelente capitulo además me intriga saber que pasó cln la verdadera espada de naruto.

Hisui

Awesome

Mystery got more mysterious

I hope naruto can befriend Mavis

Also will there be references to dragon blade Chronicles?

Sigueee:)

Im fucking done bro. Like for real your inconsistency is just at the top mate. Like for real. Im so done.