love it, cant wait for more, though it possibe to do RWBY as well? like do team rwby in one box like tou did in totally spies chapter, then do pyrrha and nora, then glynda and winter, then ilia and sienna, then coco and velvet, then salem, cinder, emerald and neo, then team milf being summer, raven, kali and willow, and if you feel generous somehow but all the mention names in one box!

Well, I think I just discovered a new fetish because of you. Nice. XP

This fic is pretty simple: Just shameless smut with basic plot and same setting. And yet, because of its simplicity and bluntness, I like it.

I guess my only criticism is that I think you write it too quickly and too shortly. I believe that often times it's best to take your time on describing the scenes, as well as building up to the moment.
- Take porn for example. Even they have some buildup to the actual part of the story we're all here for, but that buildup is what makes it even better. I mean, porn/smut without some context is often pretty weird.

(As for the grammar part, I would explain it, but it would take a little too long to be honest. If you like, I can offer to beta write the grammar.)

Sweet and hot

Nice

Huh, so Kim is gone to be lost in a dimensional traveling box of sex?

Hmm... Well to be honest, even though you ARE off to a really great start by starting off with a few of the characters from 'Kim Possible', I wouldn't mind seeing either teenage Gwen from 'Ben 10:Alien Force' or possibly even Fiona from the genderbent version series of 'Adventure Time' take on this so-called 'FuckBox' ..

Mainly because I can imagine the latter being completely innocent & curious about this kind of stuff, while the first one, well, I would just like to see how SHE would react to this sorta stuff...

Woah new fetish unlocked

The FuckBox. Stealing girls since time immemorial .

well this was interesting.