Reviews for Parasitic Worm
DragonLark chapter 3 . 11/16/2019
Beautiful chapter mate!
Have a Wonderful Wonderful day!
Sneky chapter 3 . 11/16/2019
Pretty interesting so far, can't say I remember too much about the troops but you've covered her powers decently so far. Definitely not the most heroic seeming powers and when combined with the TaylorTM mindset I can't see it ending too well. Still though, look forward to seeing more
A fan chapter 3 . 11/4/2019
Interesting.
I'm not entirely sure how you plan to develop this because not much has happened plot wise, but I'm interested in seeing where you take this.
Please continue.
FerunaLutelou chapter 3 . 11/1/2019
Nice.
zerochance117 chapter 3 . 11/1/2019
Cool does she have the fog generating power to and if so can she make it eat metal or make the thralls/mindless zombie but not a zombie things that eventually go back to normal after being removed from the fog after a while. And does she also have quiets abilities to as she is technically just a different variant of the parasite troopers than the skulls.
Also great work so far can't wait for more
Zapper3000380 chapter 2 . 10/29/2019
nice
zerochance117 chapter 2 . 10/17/2019
Got to admit that this story is suprising well done so far and I can't wait for more of it also curious about if she will get the outfits/and or gear/loadout of the skulls/parasite troopers or whatever it is called for them it been awhile since I played mgs5tpp so sorry if i got the names of them wrong
superpierce chapter 2 . 10/17/2019
was hoping for some parasite action.
FerunaLutelou chapter 2 . 10/16/2019
Nice
TorrentAB chapter 2 . 10/15/2019
I’ll be honest, I really do want to see some revenge taken, especially on Blackwell as she is the one most at fault for all of this. Too many fics just let her off easy. And a Doom omake sounds great!
Anastor chapter 1 . 10/14/2019
Seems like a good start! It’s an interesting idea, but I’m curious as to what type of skulls trooper she’s modeled after Mist, armor, or Camo? Or is she a mishmash of the three? Does she have metallic archaea? Is the power replicating the effects of the parasite, or has it created a “layer” of skin that mimics the parasites abilities? Very curious to see which direction you choose to go in!
ElDragonRojoX chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
Hella (Goddess of death)? Venandi (Latin for hunter)? Black Mantis? Umbra (Latin for Shadow, Darkness, Ghost)? Taylor's mother was an English teacher right?, maybe look for something that makes reference to a literary work? Anyway i'm really looking forward for what comes out of this.
Dracomancer1 chapter 1 . 9/26/2019
Very decent first chapter. I could see a couple points where you slipped a bit on the first and third person perspectives, but the imagery was great.
DapperDalton chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
Idea for the cape name: Viridian. Since her eyes turn green, she could pair it with a darker green outfit. It sounds a pretty heroic as well!
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
Huh. So, Parasite unit with a dash of Quiet perhaps? Considering this is more likely than not a new twist on QA, I'd say she has Trump (for giving powers) and Master (for ability to control those she "recruits") power rating too.
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