I'd had hoped this would be longer, but still a cute and wholesome way to end it, nice job!

Very lovely story you’ve wrote. Not too many fanfics about Byleth and Marianne our there, but this is great. Hopefully you can write some side stories about them if you’re ever up to it. Such as extra moments here and there leading up to the proposal and or after the war. Anyways have a enjoyed this very much. This was very good as your first fanfic so keep on writing~

If this really is the end and not just the end of the chapter, then this is a nice note to go out on. This was very well written and the two just go together like PB&J. A shame Byleth and Marianne's moment was ruined though. But hey, it just means they'll have something to look forward too when the war ends.

I really like this two parter, a nice bit of fluff was needed to balance out the roller coaster Byleth went through in 12-13. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Lol, Dorte doesn't want anyone but Marianne to handle him.

Omg this is way better than their actual support conversations! Please don't stop.

Marianne and Byleth are just so good together.

Great work:)

The feels! The wait was so worth it!

This chapter started out sad, but ended so sweet. I absolutely love what you're doing with this pairing. Keep up the good work.

Great work, really looking forward to the next chapter!

This is a great fanfic, and I haven't even been into fanfics in years. Great job!

Aaaaah, this was sweet, I really wish we got more moments with the character of our choice, like the Goddess Tower scene.

Despite how predictable daddy Jeralt's fate was, he was still an enjoyable character in my opinion and Byleth showing anger shows that at this point he is already showing emotions.

the fishing scene was great, I liked that. I don't mind the change of pace, but it seems that some conversation and scenes were a bit dissatisfying such as Jeralt telling Byleth about the beast and Kronya's scene. College is hell haha, but please take your time in your work.