Reviews for Unity
aspiringgeek chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
good job
russia2774 chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
more updates please
effronferran chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
That was bomb...and very sexy!
ROMITRI TOGETHER FOREVER chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
Lovely chapter!
debpreato chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
Beautiful..flows with love ..sensuality and fire.
Jadedcorn chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
So glad you're back! Another great one-shot of our beloved couple :)
VioletQueenMarie chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Oh my God! I screamed when I saw this in the VA fanfic archive. This was so good. My favorite part was the figurative language. It really brought the descriptions to life. I love your one-shots so much, and I hope you post more soon :-)
Alena Pfau chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Love it! I like how you write his POV and the feeling of that moment.
The part where he hears himself say that they should go to their apartment and how he noticed how she replied was really good. I liked that.
The thing with cigar smoke and honey comb was a bit weird though.
But I really liked it. Wouldn't have minded it turning i to a lemon ;)
stardreamer2608 chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Loved the chapter please continue to update can't wait for more
Maria Rodrguez chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Hola autor ️muy buena elección de palabras, pude imaginar a rose y Dimitri en ese momento trasmitir todo su amor y a Dimitri tratando de ser el guardián correcto pero cuando se trata de rose se le olvida aveces muchas gracias y seguí así