Reviews for Unity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() more updates please |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was bomb...and very sexy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful..flows with love ..sensuality and fire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad you're back! Another great one-shot of our beloved couple :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God! I screamed when I saw this in the VA fanfic archive. This was so good. My favorite part was the figurative language. It really brought the descriptions to life. I love your one-shots so much, and I hope you post more soon :-) |
![]() ![]() Love it! I like how you write his POV and the feeling of that moment. The part where he hears himself say that they should go to their apartment and how he noticed how she replied was really good. I liked that. The thing with cigar smoke and honey comb was a bit weird though. But I really liked it. Wouldn't have minded it turning i to a lemon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter please continue to update can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola autor ️muy buena elección de palabras, pude imaginar a rose y Dimitri en ese momento trasmitir todo su amor y a Dimitri tratando de ser el guardián correcto pero cuando se trata de rose se le olvida aveces muchas gracias y seguí así |