Jeffrey getting fat haha I burst out laughing when I read that great chapter!

This fanfiction is incredible! i can't wait for the next update, hopefully it will come soon. This story has me hooked, I literally can't stop reading it. It's so incredible, do you think at some point we'll get to see Fontaine finding out more about Finn's past and comforting him? I'd love to see some chapters about that, showing how different the two of their pasts are. Do you think sometime soon Finn will reveal himself? This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read! It's really amazing and I'm loving it. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Haha ace so far, this really made me laugh because my brother is called Cooper

Awww, poor Fontaine and Finn! This is making me sad!
Suddenly gaining an illness and then it randomly disappearing? Hmmm… suspicious! Very suspicious!
(Yes, I read the whole thing before typing any review because I felt bad about taking two days to read.)

O_O For your personal experience, this wasn’t recent, was it?

Sorry to ask,but if Finn is atlantean, is mad madeline atlantean too?
#hugfinn2020

Aww poor Fontaine and Finn -gives them a blanket-

Well, now I'm worried. :/ I can relate to how she's feeling...

This is very concerning, though.

How are you just BETTER now? *confused*

I like seeing OCs as long as they aren't, like, Mary/Gary Stus. I don't think I've seen a lot of doctor OCs, but that might just be because I don't really see that many OC fanfics. OwO

Jeffrey is...NOT happy with Nereus XD. Typical.

A protection curse? How does that help? :/ I mean, she was SICK, soooo...?

And is that Luna? Why's she there?

Now I'm even more worried about what he's gonna tell them. XD

I don't think I've ever passed out before...I've had panic attacks a few times in my life. They were NOT pleasant, at ALL. I HATED IT. I almost couldn't BREATHE. Uuuuggghhh.

Excited for the next one!

#hugfinn2020

Random Fan is OUT!

Oooooh, it's a chappie! 0.0 (Honestly, all the stories I'm following have been updating recently and I'm a VERY happy reader)
and holy moly, are we going to find out what's goin' on? Is Nereus going to metaphorically SPILL THE BEANS!? IDK why I put metaphorically in there, seeing as Nereus probably wouldn't spill actual beans, but as I'm sure you've gathered from this review, my mind is a little bit wild currently XD

Am I the only one who sees Nereus as the old man from phantom hourglass? Also hugs for everyone! And a cookie for Jeffrey and Finn.

I love the family starting to accept Finn! Despite not knowing it’s him yet.
So cute!

*shoots accusing glare at Nereus* Yes, I'm SURE the old dude who doesn't ever give straight answer would know the answer...

Is this minor character an OC? OwO I'd be interested in seeing her.

#hugfinn2020

:D RF, OUT!

Oh, it's just bc Fontaine and the "ghost" went swimming in the ocean in the middle of the night with a glowing giant sea-horse.
...well, when I say it like that-

Oops, I forgot!

#hugfinn2020

Now I can rest in peace lol XD

LOL so pure XD

XD Full names are trouble.
Ant, no! Spray bottle time!