| Reviews for So That Nobody Will Cry |
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   EMIYA KURO chapter 4 . 5/20 Very very interesting... I look forward to see where this is going.. |
| Neededsomething chapter 4 . 1/26 Thanks for the story, i hope it gets updated some day. Its fun seeing Shirou comparing Ghira to Kiritsugu. |
| alexkellar chapter 4 . 1/2 It's a shame you couldn't finish on time, but you certainly tried hard at the beginning. history has an interesting route, and I would have liked to see where it would take us, I hope one day it continues. thanks for participating! Keep up the good work! |
| Nikkless chapter 4 . 1/1 more please |
| Josegeronimo Lujan chapter 4 . 12/25/2019 quiero mas¡ |
| Kian Xki chapter 4 . 12/25/2019 Mistake; you mentioned the sword making process twice, one as a brief recollection and the other as a scene "Yep, Ghira and i had our father-son bonding moment when i learnes to make swords "Err... Shirou, you are too young to Huntsman Acadmies but i will show you how to make a training sword" " Didn't we do that yesterday?" Kind of moment Also, didn't you mention a training place earlier? Or is this a flashback? |
| ShadowFlameDragon03 chapter 4 . 12/8/2019 Great chapter! Keep up the good work |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2019 the moment you said he couldn't use his magic circuts (something that is part of his fucking SOUL not body) is the moment i lost interest. Have fun with your shit nerf story dickhead. |
| SeanHicks4 chapter 4 . 11/18/2019 Interesting take, looking forward to seeing some more. Only issue I’m having is how you seem to be repeating yourself with the bokken carving. |
| jon02789555 chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 good story please update |
| Serafina Fairway chapter 4 . 11/6/2019 Oh, boo. This is adorable and interesting. I hope to see where it goes! |
| TheChoZenFive chapter 4 . 10/30/2019 Nice job. Keep it up. |
| shdowstep chapter 4 . 10/30/2019 Really like what you've started, and I hope you are able to continue! |
| Warmach1ne32 chapter 2 . 10/25/2019 Villain: About to win MC: The opening music starts playing Villain: sweats lol |
| roegdbp chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 Hello! It my ever first or first ever (how right ?) review for for my english i live in non english speaking your story awesome as it easy to read in one breath. I have the question about advancing Shiro's ability - reinforcement and tracing ,would you improve example in one fic used aspect of reinforcement to improving like muscles become more explosive ,bones harder and denser ,brain increase reaction rate and speed of through such as he can calculating faster or see all in slow motion,organs immunity .In other fic applied working mechanic of reinforcement .It fill the empties in body like between muscules and bones in first stage, in second between organs ,third tussies of organs ,fours cell . |
