Another one bites the dust...

I love all of this! Its intriguing, well written, seems like you got the story going in a great direction! Love how the hunter is so inhuman and loves corrupting his student. Perfect moment at the end where he finally succeeded in his first hunt, it's a great feeling! Love what the good hunter can do with his great one powers and how he refers to doll as mother is really sweet
Great job -

We all hope you continue this good story sir

I will await your return

Hmmm, is bran going to be joining the kings journey back to the red keep

Na dont add Summer the Direwolves will avoid them like the plague

And now I know why Valyria has fallen, a Great Old One tried to ender the world and the world rejects it, I wonder when Jon visit Valyria he will see a piece of Yharnam

He will be in for a talking to of what he did and why.

Damn, Jons blood is now then singing, I wonder if he will be labeled as the Butcher of the Westerlands!?

What the fuck!? Barristan is an old warrior he must have felt that something was amidst and Jon, now he will buthcer the lannisters either in the capital if Ned will bring him to watch his brothers and sisters or stay in Winterfell and who knows, rumors will fly about that Jon has a presence of a Stark Winter king of Old. Age of Heroes old

Wait so fi he dies in the waking world he will stil revive?

Oh damn, does he have the holy moonlight sowrd and Ghernams scythe

I hope you pick it back up.

Fantastic story so far. Excited for the next chapter

Quite enjoyable story so far, please continue. Grim and violent Jon is fantastic.