Hi! Oh my God i love your story! I really hope this is not discontinued!

Please continue!

I'm making a second part to this right now!

Noooo you can’t leave it on that

I can see why people may think Shinsou is abused. But I feel like if that was the case he would have cracked a long time ago. He seems to have some stability of some kind keeping himself together despite all the bullying from his quirk. But, in a story like this either you have to have an abuse or neglect situation to make it work.

This isn't a bad idea. I'm already getting slightly depressed reading this, but I'll be fine. I think you have a good basis, but it's kind of obvious you are skipping revision. Revision isn't just supposed to be correcting mistakes but filling things out and eliminate things that don't work. In this case the story could use some more filling in. Maybe some more description. Hizashi needs to be a lot louder and more expressive in dialogue to have his character in character. I can see slow improvement from chapter one though so don't give up on this story. I'd maybe try to look for a beta maybe to help out with development. Though finding any of those is a real pain, or you can maybe have a friend help you.

This is literally (hehe literature cuz it’s a story and Present Mic teaches English- I’ll see myself out) Aizawa and Present Mic being fathers I love this and definitely would enjoy more of it.