So, Taylor gave 17 fucks?

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

Insomnia sucks, speaking from experience even. So I have this whole guilt thing going for being glad you couldn't sleep cause it means I get story. Guilt also sucks BTW. Great chapter. I figure Revan would think the Nazi movement was just kinda pathetic and that Taylor's plan sounds brilliant.

Hello! I see you've been busy writing other fics. Hope you're doing well.
Love this piece, is it still going? You mentioned merchants appearing in the next chapter!

In one word. YES. Commented on a couple other stories, checking them all out for flavors. I find I like the crossovers the best, or at least usually. Can't wait for more!

Love what you’ve done with this story. I kinda got blocked by the big monster in the basement of the first world in KOTOR 1 and hadn’t completed it. I hope you muse restarts to post more of this story.

More please!

I’m enjoying this story so far, but mildly concerned by the way people are acting out of character and find it somewhat jarring.

I’m also mildly surprised that you think Rachel had little to no character; considering that she has some of the most character development out of anyone in the story (starts off hating Taylor, can only truly relate to dogs, gradually shifts away from that mentality throughout the entire story until the end, at which point she holds a perfectly normal conversation with Vista and Miss Militia while acting completely civil and without much aggression) I think that’s a bit of a disservice to both her, as well as Wildbow’s incredible writing. Like, every character had development. Even Scapegoat did, and we got that through a single line.

Anyways, rant over. I’d like to point you towards Interlude 11a and Teneral e.4, both chapters from Rachel’s perspective with an excellent view on how she thinks, feels, and perceived the world. Please keep in mind that I’m honestly trying to help; I’ve written the Worm characters OOC as well, and that’s probably the main reason why I don’t want you to fall into the same trap.

I'm not sure an argument can be made against Darth Revan on strength. Because, see, he didn't have the Veil of the Dark Side to hide his movements... and he still pulled it off. He was just smart enough to know when not to use a power. Sidious and Vader didn't have that.

Ignore that lastro review its your story a nice some people are not happy unless you follow cannon exactly keep up the good work

Your introduction makes me reeeeeally not want to read this fic. I opened it twice already and closed it because of your attitude of "Fuck Worm", not wanting to read it and dismissing it with prejudice.
I'll just embrace that same prejudice and avoid your worm fics.

This makes me wonder of Star Wars AU's where Revan is reincarnated as Anakin SkyWalker or Leia Organa or Rey. What would have been the changes to Canon?

Honestly, I am surprised there are no Worm CYOA where the MC decides to say 'fuck it' and turn Bitch into a Werewolf. She would have valid reason for her behavior then. She could blame it on the Wolf's instincts.

reread. even better. woo hoo

She is sassy as fuck, holy shit I like her, can we keep her?"

You stole that from alucard!