i have seen the video, it was crushing to know that the scene almost went into the final movie

Eso fue macabro!
Me dió miedo...

Woah so dark...
Got the Romeo and Juliet vibes..
I like your story thanks for sharing

Now I know what a first kiss is lol. Great story

Now that's just a bit torturing, and to a robot. BTW, I saw you updated your profiled so are you going to update your stories, which I bet is hella good, not that im impatient

this should be horrifing but the internet has made me mature to the point where death means nothing to me if anything it brings joy to me seeing other things suffer. anyway all i have to say is ' not depressing enough '

Well, I'm traumatized. Good job!

Little side note, your use of present tense mixes up with past tense a bit. For example, "Wall-e *looks* at his hand and then to Eve's. He then *reached*..."

I'd like to imagine that everyone watching cringed in harmony at Wall-e nonchalantly crushing his crush.