I've been thinking about this instead of making super Saiyan required with rage make it so that when the body has too much power to handle it transforms so say when goku got a rage boost from when Krillin died the power was already there he was just unlocking it but he unlocked too much at once then transformed. but make Saiyan blood only I don't want Yamcha going super Saiyan :)

Dammit.. Not another gamer story that has the main character scream out attack names like a dumbass.. It's one thing for the masenko or kamehameha, that's canon, but seriously? Screaming out "power strike" or "ki reinforcement" ...? Pure retardation.

OK giving him a sword? Nah. I know he had a sword during the training arc but it feels like you're gonna have him use it for the rest of the story. Fuck swords. You unoriginal fuck.

Haha your Gohan is so fucking ooc.

Eh, I understand - I've done this with my Fanfics before too.

On the plus side this story will be on the Fanfic Archive in case if people want to find the old version

Yooooo, get in the Klldarkness Discord. If you want the link directly just PM me. Dude developed an excellent gamer system for Dragon Ball, and there are two others in there making stories; Sora and Haise.

The former has scaled dragon ball power level wise all the way up to the U6 vs U7 tournament, and has explanations for everything. Him and I have even figured out multipliers for Golden Oozaru and Super Saiyan 4.

The latter has two Dragon Ball gamer stories going on, and both use a version of Kll's method, which, between the two of them and all of us fans, we can definitely get you something that works 100 for you.

Also, kinda sucks that you have to rewrite this. It was pretty damn good if you ask me(mid-ish B tier), but oh well. Lastly, if you meant "lost" as "it broke" then you MAY still be able to access your old information with a data recovery service or even just plugging the old hard drive into the new PC.

If you meant "lost" as in "lost or stolen" then yeah, can't help ya unless you backed it up to the cloud or another external source like I did.

Anyway, let me know, dude! I look forward to the rewrite.

~Drunk

Maybe power levels can be a combination of all gamer stats except intelligence and wisdom and luck.
Strength
Endurance
Agility
2 maybe
Intelligence and wisdom help learn abilities faster and learn life skills easier

Marvelous Chapter!
I loved your writing!
The fighting scenes are very good as well!
Thanks a lot for the chapter!

Sigue subiendo capitulos por favor que está muy buena

Can you do the power level system as well in the gamer?
I want to see how powerful Gohan has become.

Cool, this should be interesting seeing Gohan become so strong at his current age, I wonder if his gamer mind might stop him from becoming a super saiyan which would be interesting. Think about it, everyone become super Saiyan and he beats them down in his base form with no power up, it would make Vegeta lose it very fast.

This seems like this will be an interesting story.

The only advice I had is make sure if you’re using Gohan as the main character, actually write him as Gohan. At his core Gohan is a meek, scared little boy prior to the Cell saga. I know he has Gamer’s mind to balance out his fear but it’s important to characterise Gohan as Gohan.

Also a side note I just thought about, since the Super Saiyan transformation is triggered by rage and he’s currently incapable of feeling strong emotions, does this mean he’s currently incapable of becoming a super saiyan? Because that might set up for some interesting situations later in the plot

omfg this is awesome. It is as good as another, I read that has kid Goku as the gamer with Bulma helping him get stronger cause you know Goku is a moron. anyways I hope you update this soon, I cannot wait to see how Gohan will deal with this situation.

Fuck! paperwork...
lol

Damn, didn’t even think that the boss would try and bestow his blessing, thought it would have to be a willing thing. Very interesting, wonder what will happen in the end?