Reviews for Beyond the Gap (Original)
nathan.vuong.5 chapter 2 . 14h
I hate to be technical but answering sin -1/2 isn't exactly something impressive
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
I wish the planes Walker wasn't issei theirs the ones from the game or a oc would have been so much better.
Zerak chapter 19 . 6/29
Glad to hear that. I really liked this story but the character interactions were just unbearable. The story itself was amazing. Specially the lore parts. But I just kept dropping and picking it up.
cybandeath chapter 19 . 6/27
would recommend not deleting things both so people can enjoy the comparison of both stories but also so you have something to look at for the new one.
Cristian Njoroge chapter 19 . 6/26
Don't delete this one I love this story please I don't want to wait for another year for it to continue please don't delete it.
TOWTWUKER chapter 19 . 6/24
Why delete it... It's shows ur progress as a writer.
allied2me chapter 1 . 6/24
plz continue the story
vandersee62 chapter 19 . 6/24
Let us beginn
jaciro500 chapter 18 . 6/6
Oh I'll be waiting cause I love the idea and if the execution is going to be even better than my fanboy-ness will go to places beyond my comprehension.
Chronos0305 chapter 18 . 6/5
Well I am ok with a rewrite, just hope it comes soon. And glad to know the story is coming back. Still, I can't wrap my head around the red avatar. Green I have a pretty good guess, red absolutely none. Still can't wait for it.
frankieu chapter 18 . 6/4
good to hear this store is getting worked on again thx for the notice
looking forward to the rewrite
meenthetho chapter 18 . 6/4
Looking forward to it
kronos797 chapter 1 . 4/28
red vs old wakler nicol, nicol wins. red vs new walker nicol, red wins.
jaciro500 chapter 17 . 3/7
Sorry to hear about the hiatus, but I'll still be waiting when your writer's block dies off. Good luck.
Zerak chapter 9 . 2/23
Ya I can’t handle how forced it feels. Like why add a antagonist into his class when there is a big world already why do you need to force events to happen.

I read the first few paragraphs of this chapter and couldn’t keep reading. I will likely come back and try reading it again in the future. I really do hope that after the raider arc it starts t flow more naturally, as most of the forced interactions with Rias and her peerage seems to be leading up to her asking him for help with riser.
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