Reviews for Beyond the Gap (Original) |
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nathan.vuong.5 chapter 2 . 14h I hate to be technical but answering sin -1/2 isn't exactly something impressive |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2 I wish the planes Walker wasn't issei theirs the ones from the game or a oc would have been so much better. |
Zerak chapter 19 . 6/29 Glad to hear that. I really liked this story but the character interactions were just unbearable. The story itself was amazing. Specially the lore parts. But I just kept dropping and picking it up. |
cybandeath chapter 19 . 6/27 would recommend not deleting things both so people can enjoy the comparison of both stories but also so you have something to look at for the new one. |
Cristian Njoroge chapter 19 . 6/26 Don't delete this one I love this story please I don't want to wait for another year for it to continue please don't delete it. |
TOWTWUKER chapter 19 . 6/24 Why delete it... It's shows ur progress as a writer. |
allied2me chapter 1 . 6/24 plz continue the story |
vandersee62 chapter 19 . 6/24 Let us beginn |
jaciro500 chapter 18 . 6/6 Oh I'll be waiting cause I love the idea and if the execution is going to be even better than my fanboy-ness will go to places beyond my comprehension. |
Chronos0305 chapter 18 . 6/5 Well I am ok with a rewrite, just hope it comes soon. And glad to know the story is coming back. Still, I can't wrap my head around the red avatar. Green I have a pretty good guess, red absolutely none. Still can't wait for it. |
frankieu chapter 18 . 6/4 good to hear this store is getting worked on again thx for the notice looking forward to the rewrite |
meenthetho chapter 18 . 6/4 Looking forward to it |
kronos797 chapter 1 . 4/28 red vs old wakler nicol, nicol wins. red vs new walker nicol, red wins. |
jaciro500 chapter 17 . 3/7 Sorry to hear about the hiatus, but I'll still be waiting when your writer's block dies off. Good luck. |
Zerak chapter 9 . 2/23 Ya I can’t handle how forced it feels. Like why add a antagonist into his class when there is a big world already why do you need to force events to happen. I read the first few paragraphs of this chapter and couldn’t keep reading. I will likely come back and try reading it again in the future. I really do hope that after the raider arc it starts t flow more naturally, as most of the forced interactions with Rias and her peerage seems to be leading up to her asking him for help with riser. |