Nice ending to an enjoyable story. However, I hope we get to see more of this.

Wow, did not see that coming. It was kinda epic. Great job!

Question for Nemesis: Because you're made by MECH, how much of you is cybertronian? Obviously you have a stuff like a t-cog and spark, but is the rest of you made from earthly substances like steel?

Okay, I’m hoping that Optimus will figure out that his double is good and help him. Cause Nemesis needs it right now.

Yeah! I'm really, really into this story! Great idea, good spell/grammar checking, amazing execution. I especially like the combination of some stuff from the bumblebee movie and a morally good, if inexperienced Nemesis Prime.
*reviewers five OCs aim various weapons*
Now go write more... OR FACE THE WRATH OF YOUR FANS!
:D

Welp, something tells me this is gonna be a crazy meeting for everyone. Also I love the show Clone Wars! Can’t wait for what happens next!

Uh oh, the bots are out looking for Nemesis. That ain’t good. Meanwhile we were introduced to Tim, he’s interesting...I guess. Great chapter!

I'm getting some strong Bumblebee and Charlie vibes here! This is looking really good so far. Deffinitely looking forward to more chapters.

Huh, this is getting really good! I’m liking it!

Hmmm, this is really interesting so far. Keep up the good work. I’m looking forward to what happens next.