Reviews for Project: Demon Dream
hai chapter 1 . 6/4
it is cool :v
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 15 . 11/28/2019
There’s nothing wrong with world building. Maybe you can do the naming thing in a later chapter.
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 14 . 11/28/2019
I loved the wholesomeness of this chapter! Fluff is the best!
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 13 . 11/28/2019
Burning Leo, I appreciate you trying to help out, but has it ever occurred to you that CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT is a thing?!
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 12 . 11/8/2019
I don’t like this burning Leo...
Also I’m detecting the hints of a coming up ship ;)
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 10 . 11/4/2019
I can’t think of a villain but this chapter is so adorable. I’m so sorry for missing it!
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 11 . 11/2/2019
Me: Screw you too Zero.
Zero: What?
Me: As a devoted member of the rabbit clan, your comment offends me.
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 9 . 10/21/2019
Meh. Idc if there are more chapters to this arc. I like it when things are detailed!
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 8 . 10/14/2019
I think it’s ironic that Zero will say shit and fuck but for some reason won’t say damn XD
Also I think Kirby will find some way to restrain Zero and knock some sense into his sorry little ass.
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 7 . 10/3/2019
When I heard the phrase “crystal crayons” I immediately thought back to this pack of sparkly crayons I had got as a birthday present when I was in kindergarten. I’m fricking weird XD
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 6 . 9/24/2019
Me: (slaps Zero) NUUUUUUUUUUUUU DONT HURT DA MARSHMALLOW
Zero: ...
Zero: (stabs me in the leg)
Me: (inhales)
Me: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 5 . 9/19/2019
I like the idea of a bakery ran by bunnies. That would be adorable!
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 4 . 9/7/2019
Me: (sees that you referenced a meme in the chapter) HOW COULD YOU! MONSTER!
Anabelle (my OC): Pretty bold of you to say that when you’re always writing crackhead shitpost fanfics.
Me: ...true dat. I’m sorry. And of course Meta Knight is watching everyone from the trees. Pretty sure he spent 90% of Kirby: Right Back At Ya! doing just that. F*cking creep.
Anabelle: (dying of laughter)
Bunnyrabbit202 chapter 3 . 9/1/2019
I can’t think of anything to put here. Good chapter tho!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2019
Could you make another chapter for the an eye and a puff fanfic please
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