Reviews for The Captive and the Cobra
LittleMissRunOn chapter 4 . 6/26
AHHH I absolutely love your fire imagery in this. The unbridled passion (emotionally but we all know your physical representations of passion are second to NONE), the fucking /game/, the fierce deity allusions... Well fucking done; I also really really like this characterization of Bakura - while more flamboyant than we are used to I absolutely see it fitting him. It's 100% natural to him and if canon-wise they had been in this position he would've 100% reacted exactly like this. And considering how much of a fan I am of Atem making Yugi be a wanton wet whining mess, I am thoroughly enjoying the turns being tabled on Atem and him being a wanton screaming mess. Fucking fantastic.

I swear it's impossible for you to write anything that's less than perfect xD I'm going to sound like a broken record by the end of this week.
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 4 . 4/9
AHHHH YOU FINALLY WROTE A CASTE LEMON AFTER THE EONS I'VE KNOWN YOU & IT EAS FUCKING BRILLIANT! Hxffxgdffhdgf *implodes*

*Clears throat* I am not sorry lol.

Girl, this is what I always imagined your first Dark lemon to be like! I loved the description of their bodies & the power play. It was fantastic! Oh & the way Atem became a willing party was perfect! Gods, I just loved when he told Bakura he was the Thief King!

You know I've seen a few things about the name Bakura. One I saw said it means "ripen fruit", but I can't remember exactly where I saw it or the language.

Their sex would be very rough & full of passion & you captured it so beautifully! Ahh so dead! I read this twice & I'm overly dying!

Now the results of this will be quite interesting. I eagerly await!

Girl, it's all good. We all can't go to work like J can, so focus on what you need to!

Such an amazing chapter. Please keep your Kuris on standby for me lol.
BrownLikeSugarD chapter 4 . 4/9
Oh, my... That was steamy. How come you didn't rated it M ?
Seth's Kiss chapter 1 . 4/9
Gosh darn, holy blimey n' hell, I ADORE your fics !

Even since the Dragon's Rose, I come and go, and your content NEVER fails to disappoint, I freaking LOVE it !

So creative, so dark and so well-written, everything to keep me hooked X3 I'm like totally on board with whatever you write anyways, squeeee !

I simply can't wait for more ! Best of luck and thank you SO much for writing this gem !

Take care, dearest Queen, and please stay safe in these dire times.

Seth's Kiss
Yaminisu chapter 4 . 4/9
Loved the update. It was very interesting. But now I’m still curious since the contest seems to have been inconclusive is Bakura still going to let him go?
kathawk chapter 4 . 4/9
Oh gods, that was amazing! Both in perfect character, and the way you transferred Atem from captive to consent was perfect. It was a pleasure to read
Atarya QueenofEgypt chapter 4 . 4/8
Queen of Plot Twists can you get the Yu-Gi-Oh season one story back for me from watertribegirl? She stole it without my permission.
yesterdaysmaybe chapter 3 . 4/8
Hey chika!

So happy to see this up! I love the interactions between them-the push and pull is very tangible here. The kiss was hot! -. I also laughed when Bakura was teasing Atemu about being a virgin. HMMM! Somehow I think I know what the challenge will be, and I know who's going to win. But of course Atemu's pride as a gamer makes it so he'll never turn away from any challenge. Bakura's practically got him in the palm of his hand. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Good job as always! :)
xx Saph chapter 1 . 4/6
Yay this updated again! I've said it before and I'll say it again, I absolutely love how you write Bakura and Atem too! Can't wait to see where this goes!

As for Bakura's age, I'd say he was about 4 or 5 years old when the Kul Elna massacre happened, and that was 15 years before the events shown Memory World arc according to Akhenaden, so I'd estimate him to be about 19 or 20.
Yaminisu chapter 3 . 4/5
Love this. And I know this might sound random but I honestly actually want Atem to win. I think it would be hilarious if Bakura teases and molests him but Atem manages to win. Not that it’ll matter. Even winning things will just become more intense between the two.

Two bad the ancient Egyptians didn’t have a holiday like Valentine’s Day. It’d be hilarious if Bakura started leaving him gifts that have everyone but Atem puzzled by.
kathawk chapter 3 . 4/4
I’m so glad you’ve updated this story! I reread it just the other day, and I just love how you write these two. I can’t wait for the next one!
Orochi-Dragon14 chapter 3 . 4/4
I absolutely loved that you sent this to me to look over! I was not disappointed! It was definitely worth the wait!

I absolutely love your description of Atem being a wild cat & Bakura being a snake! It fits them so well & the sexual tension is so papable! I love Atem's reaction to enjoying the kiss & Bakura telling him he knows why he's been leading the searches.

I can't wait for the game! The steaks are high & I'm so excited! Your Darkshipping is on fire, girl!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/4
You’re killing me with the slow burn of sexual tension. Like, I just need these two to fuck already omg! Lol, it was a good chapter, by the way. You have my attention and I’m really looking forward to the game you have planned out. :)
yesterdaysmaybe chapter 2 . 9/5/2019
Hey Chika!

I really like how this chapter came together! It's nice to see the inner workings of Bakura's mind and how he processes things. And it's true; two people can follow the same religion and still disagree. It's all a matter of perception. Now I wonder just how far Atemu will go to lower the thief king's guard down enough to escape? lol. Loved this chap, and can't wait for the next one. :)
nancy chapter 2 . 9/5/2019
Please finish at the King's Pleasure. You left all of us on a cliff hanger and I am sure me and my fellow readers are anxiously waiting for the next chapters.
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