Thank god for Asuma huh? HE ALWAYS KNOWS WHAT TO SAY! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Pretty good setup. Some sentences run quite long though.

This seems promising as a male oc/sı but the writing style is like reading from a diary I guess.
Well I have yet to read other chapters will comment again after that.

Good stuff

I like your OC but at one point, he will have to accept the kind of world he is living in. Because he can't continue to play the "sensible" card by always puking his guts each time something bloody happen. He will never survive in this profession. If there's something interesting that you could put him through in this training session, it's a way to ride him of this "I'm a little nature" habit once and for all.

Thanks for the chapter. :)

so his bloodline is basically kaioken.

amazing chapter also can taka learn some sword moves from roronoa kenshin especially the heavenly dragon move.

this a male self insert.

Loved it but for some reason Taka reminds me of Shiro and Kushina.