That was great! Perfect amount of angst with a lovely happy ending. I loved the last chapters. I thought you did a great job writing how they responded in angerMarinette lashing out when she finds out who Chat is, then his anger once he realises who Ladybug is were really well done. I’m happy to discover you have lots of Miraculous fics I can trawl through!

Absolutely loved this. Very well written and very believable in every point. It broke my heart to read ladybug ask adrien for his miraculous back, but even that was understandable and so was chat outburst at her window (although her parents must be deaf!). I loved this story and it would be nice to read it from a different perspective, but maybe i do think it would be better to just leave it like this, as perfect as it can be :)

It would be very interesting to read this from Marinette's POV indeed. Another great read.

Good story!

Great story! Thanks!

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Hi there! Now I'm going to start off by saying that I normally don't read first person fics. The reason for that is because the ones I have read don't seem to grasp the characters right and by having it in first person, not getting the characters down pat makes it extra awkward to read. Now you can tell based on the chapter I'm reviewing this on that I loved this story and here's why.

You get the characters down pat. In the show, Adrien is usually put on the backburner. Marinette shines and we learn a lot more about her and her thoughts. With Adrien, we know some things about him but in general we don't really know a lot, especially in regards to how he thinks. You have his thoughts and mindset down pat! You understand how he thinks and how his brain works and it was so nice to read! It felt very real, like I was in Adrien's mind and following him on his journey throughout the story!

Not to mention, you have a great description for emotions and everything Adrien went through, my heart felt it. It hurt for him! It was just amazing! Marinette totally overreacted and I was definitely glad to have her realize it too. It was especially funny with Master Fu subtley pointing out Ladybug's hypocrisy and having Chat be like, what are you guys talking about?

Also, I must point out that I loved that you kept it in one characters POV. Because of this, it kept you guessing. It's easy to write both characters thoughts in there and sometimes it's needed but a lot of the time it takes away the suspense because you're supposed to be following the main character. It's fun to guess how the other characters are feeling or thinking and see what happens, kinda like in real life. For example, Marinette's texts and responses to Chat at the beginning were cold enough that you wondered if Chat was pushing the lines. Then eventually when Alya and her were talking in her bedroom about liking Chat, my eyes literally widened and as I read Adrien say "oh no" I thought the same thing and was like OHNOSHEDIDNT. It was amazingly played out. Keep on with your writing! You do the whole 'show don't tell' thing flawlessly. Not to mention the way you describe things and shove in humour is great!

Anyway, I don't know what else to say but thank you for writing this and that I absolutely adore your writing style! Thanks for recovering my love for first person fics too! I'm definitely going to check out some of your other stories as I see you have a lot going on! As well, to answer your question, Yes, I'd love to read Marinette's thoughts about this whole situation!

This was such a beautiful way to end the story! I loved the whole thing, from the idea to the plot to the way that you expressed the characters emotions! I’ve loved going on this journey and wanted to truly thank you for writing this Amazing storyand remember that you ARE Miraculous!

Awww... middle aged superheroes!

And yes. You need to write from Marinette's point of view. You know, since you have nothing else to write. Seriously though, you dont to much that is Marinwtte centric, and I'd love to see it.

Wait... a cat who turns down cream?

And awwww... that got so fluffy!

That was a really good story
The last few chapters were awesome but you should do another story like this but they defeat hawk moth first and then they find out there identities. Adrien/chat will need Mari/ladybug more than ever. I want the story on when the defeat hawk moth and then find out there identities.
That would be a great story.

Excellent! That was a lovely story thanks!

A well deserved happy ending after all those struggles.

I'm sorry for Nooro, he is the only one who didn't get a happy ending, forced to work for a worse villain than the original Hawkmoth. The worst part of it is that it's canon.

Good detail with Marinette prefering him with the mask, when he is truly himself.

Ep, that ending... just... 100 percent purrfect. I was grinning almost the whole time. I was not grinning however when Marinette pulled out the ball of yarn... at that point I was holding back tears. That ending was just so sweet and warm amd perfect. Just... the best.

I love these last 2 chapters! And defo one of my new favourites! I'm so glad you didn't skirt over Mari's part and that they both had a lot to apologise for. And the ending was perfect *sigh* adrinette rules.
As for possibly doing a Mari point of view of the story that is a definite yes vote and please from me I would really like to see her thought processes ESPECIALLY around the last 4 chapters.
Thanks for sharing such a great story x