Очень круто. Мне понравилось. Интересно узнать, что будет во 2 фильме. Желаю вам удачи, вдохновения и здоровья.:))

really good

im realy excited for more chapters

Nice work I look forward to more

Es Maverick

This was a nice read. Thank you.

This was actually really well made, I hope you decide to do more in the future.

Thanks a lot for writing such a great story.

Zootopia Reference, nice.

Dude, I haven’t read through the story completely, but from what the two longest reviewers are saying, it strikes me, the potential reader, like this.

A) You didn’t put much thought into this. You wanted a crossover and decided “What the Hell, if nobody is gonna do this crossover, I’ll do it. I don’t know as much about these two series though, but I’ll just wing it regardless.”

From what the ninth reviewer stated, this isn’t Naruto. It’s an OC with his name and nothing, which will immediately make people hate it. Either actually read up on characters or don’t use them at all.

Heck, give a background on your character instead of just put them in this. That’s like someone writing about Naruto from his world being in another world without saying how he got there or why. Everybody hates that.

B) I know what I’m saying, because right off the bat, you have already screwed up. It’s Shifu. You misspelled it as Shifue. Another reason to look up the characters on their wiki pages. There’s more info there then what you read about in a fanfic.

C) from what I have learned, this is Naruto and Tigress, but you botched the development of the relationship and can’t seem to pin down if this is a harem. Seriously, if you have ever seen a situation where love at first sight has happened, go right ahead.

As to being a harem, I can already tell you don’t know what’s you want this to go since you are obviously a newb at it. I say this only because you have this rated K, so a harem is out of the question unless you change it to M. Name one harem story that wasn’t rated M.

Finally, people have already mentioned the grammar. It needs work. My only advice to sum this all up is to delete it, read up on the characters and events of the shows, think of where you want to go with it, and write in chapters.

Let’s face it, you can’t write in a long chapter like this. Very few people can and that includes me. You should just split it into chapters. It’s easier and faster, plus it will bring more people to read it.

I’m not trying to flame or get you to quit. It’s just that I do want to read a good crossover with this, but it’s hard to find one. Either because most can’t write in bloody English, they make Naruto a female, or they just plain stop writing it all together.

So, for potential readers reading this review. This is NOT Naruto. It is a fox that has the name Naruto, a fox that says Dattebayo once and acts nothing like him except for his love for noodles. This isn't a misplaced Naruto, Human Naruto or even Canon Naruto transformed into a fox to fit with that Universes Laws. Its just a random OC that likes Ramen with the name Naruto.

For the Author, I found this little fic interesting. It was all over the place but was definitely interesting. Unfortunately there are a lot of areas that needed work.

The relationship between Naruto and Tigress was very rushed. They had only interacted like 3 times for about 5 minutes a piece before proclaiming there love for each other. Not enough fluff or relationship building done.

On top of relationships I was getting a Harem vibe in this... Between Judy (From Zootopia?), Tigress, Viper and Amaterasu it certainly felt like it. Don't mind Harems but not sure what your intention is here. What ever happened to the wolf anyways? She just got a piggyback down and never spoke again.

Certain statements and actions conflict with each other. Like when he said he wasn't strong enough to help the Furious 5. He literally crushed them all in seconds, and seemed to be beating Shifu in their brief clash so how exactly is he weak?

Grammar especially was an issue, it was very common to come across. Very often I found wrong words in the wrong places.

Other than that it was interesting, the way you had Viper all over Naruto and him stroking that 'Pleasure Point' had me thinking a Lemon was gonna happen. Was weirded out for a moment, more than likely because some friend recently sent me a video of a weird cunt shagging a snake. Makes me wonder if there is actually a fic out there like that. Knowing people, probably...

Nice.

love itt. Moreee my friends.

Impresionante aunque mis dudas son exploraras a judy ? O solo apareció como un guiño
Donde esta amaterasu?

this is so good! I never knew a naruto crossover could gow with Kong fu panda! it was honestly amazing how u put naruto in there to be honest. and I love the fluff with Tigress and naruto