Throwing both Frank and Gideon over and then leaping over the chasm herself. Bruh, Pacifica is badass.
It was Mr Poolcheck all along... wow. Then I guess Pacifica just got enraged cuz she cares about Dipper and the others so much, that’s nice.
Heh, poor Dipper. Was funny tho, especially Stan’s poor job at fleeing the scene.
Nice talk between Wendy and Pacifica. Interactions between characters are the best parts about a story. In my opinion.
Ah.. the first honorary girl welcomed the second honorary girl. Rip their manlyness. Nice of Mabel to include Gideon tho.

Botttomless pit, smart.
Man, reading Gideon saying all this emotional stuff is making me want to root for him.
Heh, Frank said the wrong thing. Paz is mad... wait. Is she wrath? Noo.. or?

Seven deadly sins. Interesting choice.
Pacifica taking charge, nice. Also it’s pretty funny when Stan randomly pops up, steals something and screams ”mine”

Halfway through chapter one and they already have the gemstone? Yea, something is gonna go wrong
”I deserved that” ah, Grenda. That was brilliant, I laughed pretty hard.
Yup, fairy was bad. Pretty interesting curses, it seems that everyone’s bad habits are maxed to the extreme I guess.

Just realized I haven’t read this story yet. I really enjoyed this! It’s a great story! Neat to see Gideon and Pacifica getting along. Wendy learned a lesson. Dipper with lust at the end was great, really funny! The sins found the right people. Great story!

This was the first of your works I’d come across. Very introspective and littered with call-backs I didn’t notice until I rewatched a few episodes.
The curses were excellently selected and written well into the victims’ personalities. Not to mention utterly hilarious! The last two made me laugh out loud!
A brilliant story all around

The fact that Pacifica has played Tomb Raider makes me laugh XD
Great story! It was fun to read! Great work :D

I liked this story. It was nice and simple. I’m really excited for the next story and it will be epic, I just know it. Also nice twist making Poolcheck the subject of wrath. Clever.

I burst out laughing when Mabel trucked Stan into jumping in the bottomless pit! Priceless! Hahaha, also nice twist with Frank being the main trouble maker in this story.

I think that Robbie might have Wrath or one of your .

Cool chapter! I like it! Good workKeep it up!

The gems amped up the characters sins. Soos gluttony, Wendy Sloth, etc

I liked the little character twist in this chapter, where it looks at first like it's all going to gear up with Mabel taking point on the adventure, figuring things out and pulling everyone together to get things under control, only for - surprise! - her to get taken out (figuratively) halfway through leaving Pacifica semi-alone to weather the madness instead. Very fun set up.

Me: Excuse me for one moment. *bangs head on the table* Come on, you literally saw Shazam! Which had to do with the seven deadly sins! How did you not see this!? How!?

Hehe, I kinda felt silly for not seeing that from the title and the actions being performed. Great chapter! I’m really excited for what happens next!

Cool!