lol they were 'forced' to be thieves yet they become world renowned thieves? are you kidding me? it is completely irrational lmao

I. Love. This. Story!

This is so good! Please update soon!

This is so fricking good I love it so much!

Hello! I was reading your story and I think it has potential, but you should look at some points:
1. Nix and Tsubasa are on the limit of being Mary Sue and Gary Stu. Perfect or badass, insubstantial and inhuman characters whom it is difficult to empathize.
2. The difficulty of writing situations with chapters that have already happened is to be repetitive. Be careful with that.
3. You have started from an unbelievable premise. Those boys attending the UA because yes. They have no hero skills. I don't believe a Pro heroes would welcome them or recommend them to be a hero. I understand the potential of children and adults believe they can redirect their lives, but you have not explained anything and I think it is one of the bases for the story.
4. If you introduce Edgeshot, you have to use it and develop your relationship with the children. why has such a busy hero stayed with them? It seems to me that you are treating this point very superficially and I think it could be an important point to make the characters evolve. It struck me that you mentioned that Ryukyu supported the decision and Endeavor was against it. Perhaps you should enter a conversation between heroes to deepen that aspect. Ryukyu os kind and loves children (ok... I am Ryushot shipper hahaha). Maybe she could advise Edgeshot and Endeavor gives their opinion to Edgeshot at the sports festival.

I hope my opinion helps you. I think it can be a good story. sorry if the message is very long or misunderstood, but my English is very poor.
First chapter was really great, follow this way.

Xoxo