Reviews for Travelling Salesman
okaysunshine chapter 17 . 7/17
What a lovely hopeful end! Good work pushing through this. I feel like the Cookie Monster, I always want more of your writing!
bewitchedquill chapter 17 . 7/16
You sly dog, leaving it open ended like that. Neither together nor not together. Heehee. I liked it. It was a hopeful ending. Someone should sketch Oliver and Gene's plaid fashion shoot.
light soceress chapter 17 . 7/14
I don't remember if I previously reviewed this fic or not. If I haven't SHAME ON ME! I enjoyed reading this fic immensely! The way you write all the characters is wonderful. I liked how you developed Mai and Naru's relationship, and that Mai doesn't completely gets over her trust issues right off the bat. Thank you for sharing this lovely fic!
Kallen21 chapter 17 . 7/12
I absolutely can’t wait for the next chapter
shrinemaiden05 chapter 17 . 7/10
I hope you are doing well yourself. It was great as is! Thank you for finishing the story, I really enjoyed it! You ended it with a very realistic ending.
daughterXofXdarkness chapter 17 . 7/10
Awwwww that's very sweet! I loved it! Endings like that where it's not unrealistic some grand sweeping romantic thing but something more grounded and sweet make me happy :)
Thank you for finishing it, you already know I love your stories to pieces, but whenever you update I'm super happy.
CaitHawke4Ever chapter 17 . 7/10
Great job Snave! You set it up for a slow burn romance between Mai and Naru which was the best way to go. Stay safe. MaiXNaru forever and GeneXYasu forever!
The Night Whisperer chapter 17 . 7/10
Aww, I love how Mai and Naru are still friends and that they’re going to take baby steps to building up their relationship again. It’s perfect because Mai isn’t completely over her trust issues. So, that’s something she still needs to work on before rushing back into a relationship with Naru. So, I’m really happy with how things turned out here. Since, this gives us all a little ray of hope for the future :)
mowens00 chapter 17 . 7/10
Amazing as always! I’m so glad that Mai went and at least talked to him. That little slip where Mai almost said she still loved him was adorable. I also love that Gene told Mai how happy Naru is. All the feels. The two of them sneaking away and making Lin angry is hilarious. Loved every bit of it.
AmyNChan chapter 17 . 7/10
I think that was a really good way to end it. :))
thearistocrat chapter 17 . 7/10
Loved it!
Thank you so much for closing this story. I know it’s been hard on you. But I loved this relationship. And I love the hope left at the very end. ️
Yumerio patissiere lover chapter 1 . 7/10
This is the kind of ending that makes me ecstatic! Both Naru and Mai written amazing
Yumerio patissiere lover chapter 17 . 7/10
Awwww hell yessss that is one amazing ending! Wowowowowowow.. I am so gonna vote for you! You are almost definitely gonna win!
Kallen21 chapter 16 . 7/9
I can’t wait for next chapter
Iloveanimex chapter 16 . 7/9
Haha... it’s your story, write what you will... and I will try not to cry myself to sleep if they don’t get together XD in all seriousness, I really love this story
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