So what kind of bear are we talking? Black bear, brown, kodiak?

That’s a RIP the story is cool and I really enjoyed it until this point but bring video games and tech into a medieval world kills this for me tbh cool idea but not for me

Kinda wish you altered his body to fit the world because he seems super super out of place more so than he already would being a dragon, the incompetence will hopefully sort itself out soon I’m reluctant to read a story where the oc/mc is ignorant and weak the entire time

yum

Same here, this story is quite awesome. Never lost hope for it and it turned out amazing.

This is an amazing story. Read it all, and just came back for that good ol' nostalgia.

intersting story

I would have liked if your protagonist would ask a few questions on being this new champion that these egg heads just forcefully placed to a CIVILIAN. Reading a book is one thing, but being in it is another story. I mean will he really be ok with murdering, and being in a war that he isn’t a part of?

I hope this story will bring up his morals, and I really hope that the pacing will be good. It sort of feels just from point A-B instantly. There isn’t a description on how much time as passed for yo ur character to ponder on his predicament. Just hey disembodied voice in my head, I should totally listen to you, not at all have the time to mourn over that he will never see his friends or family ever again.

You do know bleach isn't acidic?

I like the dragon reincarnation, tho I was never really a fan of multiple heads. Gonna be interesting to see other peoples reaction to him.

Damn, kinda surprised at the bear tho. Most wild animals try to avoid conflict/dangerous prey as even the smallest injuries can become fatal, and predators who live in national parks recognize humans as too dangerous to be worth it generally - tho this bear seemed to be a Grizzly so it probably got pissed off and said "fook it". Definitely one of the more painful ways to go tho.

Great story! Locostral seems to be a mix between RP1 and Warcross. Damn, this is intriguing.

This is the best book I've read, and that's saying something. Considering I finished the inheritance cycle in a month. Best book I've ever read

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I’ve got one question though... Since you said in the story that the Shadows were still out there, I wonder if Galbatorix will accept them and become what Durza was? I understand that it would be extremely overpowered, but it sort of fits the story... or maybe Lord Barst will have the Shadows at the Battle of Urû’baen. Who knows! This story is unpredictable and oh so intriguing! I await the sequel eagerly! Keep up the amazing work and follow your heart while writing, you never know what ideas may occur!

Since I'm following this story, please put an update on here so I know the moment u post for the second story. I love ur work and really NEED to know how this all goes down! Please keep it up