These last two chapters I have to say is the best work the writer has done when it comes to romance part of the story. Just as good as the action.

This story is getting better and better. The romance in this story what makes it great. You the writer are a master of your craft for making care about what happens to these characters. You make them believable and for me to cheer them on.

I love in this chapter how their bond is strong and getting stronger. How the writer built up this romance between them is well done and makes me care about them. I am not much in reading romance in fan fiction because its mostly done poorly but this in my opinion is professional work and not an novice. He knows his craft

This fic is good so far. A sweet way how they get together.

This is an stunning chapter. I’m not familiar with WarCraft but I’m sure you put many characters who became history into it. This isn’t easy but you pull it off. Well done!

Writing lovely couple becomes your natural talent.

Never knew this part of WarCraft before.

I don’t know how to describe this, but this chapter seems beautiful.

This is dramatic. A little incident of a family...

All stories eventually come to an end. But only for new ones to take their place. Well done.

my heart aches for what will come after this story
the plague
fate of lordaeron and quelthalas
just thinking about sylvanas fate now with her having children imma about to cry :"(
good job and amazingly done I've been terrible reviewer i will do my best to review every chapter
gotta follow your new story

Really good fanfiction!

You always amaze me how much you can write. Lucky you.

This was a great chapter and my mind was blown. I cannot believe your OC for this story was the son of Kael'thas. That was a great twist that I never saw coming but now his mage like abilities make sense and why he couldn't wield the light. I am looking forward to the ending and what is coming next with the sequel.

What a twist! So Kelrian is part royalty, and by extension his children as well. I wonder how that will play out after the fall of Silvermoon and the deaths of many of the Royal family.

Also, I’m surprised that no one has ever really tried to hurt Kelrian out of jealousy. I would think one or two people would have tried already despite the consequences.