Great update! I loved seeing the Wanda/Loki team-up - it is terrifying to witness - and I really enjoyed the way the plot is thickening around young Nate. It was wonderful to catch up with our girls at the end there too. Can't wait to see how that shakes out!

Please write more

This is still so good! Loved the interaction between Yon and Carol - I like the idea that there was real friendship between them. It was cool to explore that a little. Hank was spot-on - lol. He really doesn't mince words, does he? Deadpool makes me laugh every time. Somehow it had slipped my mind that there was a shared last name X)

So fun to be back! I'm looking forward to the next chapter ;)

I don't hate gay stuff in fanfics, but the thought of Loki and Strange having sex is just... Wrong...

Reading this, many things popped into my head. The thought of Loki and Strange blowing each other certainly too me back... Or the thought of them pounding each other on the bed... That one disturbed me.

Good story, though.

"Mr. Loki"

Yay for updates! :D

And more fun characters to add to the insanity...lol. Happy to see Vision (of course,) and Deadpool is always a delightfully vulgar piece of entertainment :)

Carry On!
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Love this story!

Deadpool is an AMAZING addition to the narrative. Seriously. I love they way you worked him in X)

SO cool. Honestly, I think this is my favorite chapter yet. LOVE what you're doing with the girls in the soul world. It's perfect X)

You really do a fantastic job balancing all these characters. That's not easy - at all - and I'm really impressed by that.

As always, Carol and Rocket are spectacularly done, and I loved the parts with Loki and Morgan - they're really sweet together ;)

I didn't find the multi-verse-explaining to be boring at all, in fact, I'm really impressed that you managed to write all that in dialogue form and still keep it sounding like everybody. And they way you just braided the Spiderverse into it? Fantastic ;)

The Clint vs Loki conversation is always really tricky. I like the way you handled it. You gave credence to both sides, and still managed to bring it to a satisfactory point in a timely manner. Very nicely done.

I love Kurt and Luis X) The entire character list for the Ant Man movies are dear to me and I loved seeing them. As a fan of the myths, Kurt recognizing Loki as 'Lopt' was an intriguing detail.

Again, Carol is awesome. I love her blunt way of handling things. She's a treasure.

And I'm enjoying the mounting tension with Nate. I'm really curious to see how that spills over.

I love that you added Deadpool X)

A lot of action in this one! Very exciting. I'm really curious to see how the cliffhanger turns out!

I loved that bit with Loki, Mantis and Nebula. You described all those sensations really well, and I really enjoyed the edition of Bucky. I like Loki and Bucky together. I always thought it'd be fun to see them share some screen time. And Carol's awesome. She's really supportive, and that's great. Pete needs a new mentor, and I think Carol would be perfect in that role.

I know it's been MONTHS, but I hope your ankle's better!

I've never seen Bucky/Val before. It's surprisingly not terrible ;) I really enjoy the thought of their friendship. And a Nebula/Bruce friendship/team-up is a really neat idea!

I'm really intrigued by everything you've presented so far!

The way you write both Strange and Danvers is really kindof amazing. It feels like watching them on screen. Nebula's remarkable too. I didn't feel that this chapter dragged at all. Great job, and hopefully I'll be back soon for chapter 8! This is getting really suspenseful!