! I’m now super invested in this story IDC how long it will take I just beg ya Please finish this! Inquiring minds need to see the whole thing play out!

Please update

This story is really well written, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Well, first off, welcome back! I admit I was a little disappointed that the new chapter was... well, sort of a fleshing out of QT's fantasy from the last chapter. But, hey, no worries. I get that you're getting back into the groove. I know what you mean about this whole pandemic mess!

Can't wait for the next update

Short, but erotic. Let's see if Quinn will make her appearances in the Loud House to see her knight in shining armor again.

Happy 1st Anniversary!

update please i love your works and I can't wait for it to update sooner!

Hope to see more soon...

That was chapter full of erotic and steamy fantasy showing that Quintessa is crazy for Lincoln already. If the sisters ever meet her, they may get a little jealous and Leni may unconsciously wonder how to make her butt bigger, assuming it is already big. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Woah.

Papiii?! Man, Lincoln sure has his work cut out for him with this one. Should I expect an 'Onii-chan' or 'Onii-sama' to appear at some time in the future?

By the way, amazing work on fleshing out a character that we had close to no info on. Sure, some might say it's easier to do so because it's a blank canvas, but I know it's not so. Especially when you're not making a Mary Sue.

And you my friend are not making a Mary-Sue. Until now, her character is developing nicely in progression in regards to personality, mindset and other things. She feels realistic and lifelike.

Not only something that came out of a wet dream lol. I think you're perhaps the second or third to make the Thicc QT into something actually worth reading about.

I want to congratulate you also, I don't think there's another OlderBro Lincoln story on this site, especially not one with a harem (one including Rita- I really want you to give depth to this MILF by the way - at that). That's a great goal you set out for yourself, I shall be here accompanying you all the way to it's completion (provinding feedback and critic when needed).

Too little stories with MILFs here, there a few other older women than Rita in the TLH series. I sincerely hope you take advantage of such a thing. BUT if you don't, there's also no problem.

It's your story after all.

And Lincoln as a cop, well mall security, is a new one to me. I already read him as a secret agent, comic book, writer, artist, cook, architect and engineet, space pirate, superhero, Middle East wars veteran and a number of other things, but this one's is a completely novelty.

Actually I think there's one more writer out here that followed a cop/security path for Lincoln. I think it's Devumaru, the writer of Loving Return. But I think you're the first to write such a thing, since the chapter where he has Link decide something like this came after you had already published your chapter about Lincoln's job.

Just shows that great minds think alike. His story is one of the best in this fandom and site, a diamond really. Just like yours.

Characterization and Individual Depth is still needed for most of the other characters, though I understand you're world-building and setting the QT as an actual character and not just some face.

Their dreams, ambitions, fears, pasts, mindsets, habits, customs, manias, likes and dislikes still need to be set to completely flesh out a character. But you have a lot of time to do so, it's not suppose to be done all at once in a metaphorical vomit of info, it has to be slowly, showing over time how the character changes and experiences growth (physical, mental, emotional, spiritual) and reacts to events around.

By the way, in these I think you're doing a great job in.

Dialogues and Monologues feel very organic and lifelike. They make the characters and their interactions with each other feel human and real.

Plot is moving forward at a nice pace, even if we're not exactly able to pinpoint where it's heading. That's not necessarily a bad thing, especially not in this point in time, but with more chapters published, we, the readers, will want a greater goal/objective to be reached.

So, perhaps it would be wise to set something vague enough that can give you dynamim and leeway in how you treat characters, events and how you tell the story. Like a mirage in the distance, just to tease us with something out of sight but not of mind, just beyond what we can see.

This will open an infinite well of chances, possibilities and paths you can take with this story.

Descriptions are good. Complex enough to satisfy us readers, but not enough to bore us. Simple enough to get the point across but not enough to seem lazy.

10/10 chapter.

Hope to read more soon. Sorry about the long review and even more if I bored you, but I try to be thorough in my feedback. Keep up the good work.

really appreciate your work here

excellent work on this chapter

We're getting close to the anniversary.

I Love this! Awesome story!
BRO YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON! :)