I am happy you are continuing this story and this is a great chapter and I hope you will continue this story but please try and not to take as long to upload chapter 3

Man, this seems like it's gonna go pretty crazy, don't think Loki is going to let Ais and Tiona help bell this time. Perhaps Fraya may step in...
Well no idea were your going to go with this, but the name of your fix implys the may be more then just Hesta vs Apollo in the war since it's call war not wars... but that's just my speculation.
Well the chapter was fantastic, the characters felt right and overall the tone was clean and well written.
Well looking forwould to more whenever.

There are few corrections I must point out to you, Hestia descended several months before Bell arrived in Orario and Hestia stayed with Haphaestos for only three months before she kicked her out, not 50 years. And also Loki descend about 20-22 years before the current story timeline.

Nice chapter.

I hope this gets updated again a bit sooner! I hope to see Bell’s growth be a bit different, with Apollo’s familia possibly after him, and with no other members Bell needs to get strong even faster. And that will also make Aiz even more desperate for answers to his rapid growth!
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
And stay healthy too!

Oh Snap! Maybe it'll be a three way(War), and not in a good way!

Poor Bell Hestia kinda ruining his chances with Aiz there.

this is...actually ncie! you know. like you made appollo likable! i mean thats hard but i guess if people keep writing him 2 dimensional but you don't get a powerful familia like that without some common sense right! an wonderful chapter!

Well never expected to see this updated nice. Thought I got some concern. Bete did level up after the expedition, along with Tiona and Tione. Did you change it on purpose? The incident at the bar happened a little before the fight in melen, Bete with few others stopped on a drink. Also Hesta didn't spend in Hephaustos house 50 years. I think it was max half a year maybe a full year. Loki is the same actually. From "The Pallum's Adventure Part 1" we can know that Loki meet Finn quite soon after coming down from heaven.

Well yeah Hestia really have to much head in clouds too often. Thought she can get serious when she needs to. I am still not really sure what to think of this story but I think I will read the next chapter if you will write it. Good luck

Congratulations

Nice story, I look forward to more.

Great

Interesting little twist there

Will Bell become a little darker?One thing that i always find lacking in canon is how long it take for Bell to mature and how naive he stays,and i am looking foward to see his relationship with Aiz will develop since let's face it when she aproaches him in the beggining it's only for her obssession and only later she begin to like him as a friend

So it's still early in the story but I can't help but feel what this story is ostensibly about: Aiz and Bell with a side of Riveria, is lacking so far. While you've developed Aiz well enough, she doesn't have much of a role other than introspection, and Bell, well, he's more a prop for Aiz's internal struggle than anything else.
This might just be a personal bias of mine but I don't think it helps when one of your two main characters kind of just gets shit on for most of the chapter, by Bete, Apollo etc. and by extension his allies and goddess. If I didn't have the summary and the tagged characters to go on I'd think this was a 'Sword Oratoria' story about the Loki familia's adventures, Bell just doesn't seem relevant outside of Aiz's emotional development.
Again, it's early, but the idea of a 'Familia War' will be difficult to pull off if Bell is a glorified mob character in terms of relevance and power levels.

Congratulations! Looking forward to the next chapter.