The LORTR thing ruined for me and where is Oliver of the present since this is from the future that by the way doesn't know how to fight

Now this chapter is done. and a couple of other universes are revealed:
Blade
Star Trek: Discovery
Lucifer
Smallville
Once Upon a Time.

Then I keep reading.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos

We will!

INCREDIBLE STORY!

Well done

SUPER IRON!

Well, I certainly loved all the scenes for sure, Gabriel man. No kidding whatsoever on Thawne, come on, he even said to Barry in the season 5 finale "See you in the next Crisis" and where the fuck was he? ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOWHERE. Honestly, they find all the time to bring in a giant cuddly toy, but not the infamous Reverse Flash himself? Seriously, that really is enough to make ya roll ya eyes.

Hoohoohoo, Earth 38 Supergirl Lex Luthor is now here, hooh boy him being here can only mean some pretty bad stuff's set to happen. But you ain't kidding on him being a goodun, cos as much as I can't stand him, Jon Cryer does deliver real good on him all the same. And is lovely to get a Tolkien song included, considering what the Tolkien family are now going through this year because of the elder son's passing.

All in all, I've really really enjoyed this story so much, I will agree with others who have reviewed, our buddy Aragorn Elessar included, that you did have a few flaws and some things to be worked on and improved in the beginning, but I guess that can sorta happen in a way if you're only just starting out as an author for the first time, but as it went on, I think you did real good with addressing those issues and delivered a tremendously enjoyable and fun plot, and from me personally, thank you so so very much for including some of the Five-0 taskforce from their show, which I just learned to my absolute devastation is ending after its current tenth season, how the fuck am I gonna cope when it does, Five-0's a major part of my life, in this too. And I cannot wait to get started on the sequel and the awesomeness and tremendousness I'm sure you'll deliver in it too

At last, I'm getting here to finish this off for ya, Gabriel my man. Probably a good thing too, seeing as you've started the sequel to this today as well. So, without further ado, let's get into this...

Well, I can definitely say a big woohoo in that Blade's coming into this, man I love films 1 and 2 of that so much indeed, number 3 I'm avoiding like the plague helped by what buddy Aragorn II Elessar told me about it and why it's such a bad one. And damn right to keep Wesley Snipes as the infamous Daywalker, no one's gonna rival him at the role at all. Can't really say anything very much at all on the other scenes though if ya want the truth, as they're all from shows I've not seen one bit of at all yet, but for the Smallville one, cos I intend to hopefully start watching that show for real in the future, well, I need to say is I loved Mar-Novu rescuing Bart from his prison and allowing him to return to his Earth, plus Bart's scenes with Smallville Clark Kent afterwards

So I've finally finished this story. I've been meaning to for a while, and since I got the day off due to a terrible storm in the city, I've finally gotten the chance.

First off, I think you're a good writer who clearly has a lot of passion for his work and the fandoms involved. You don't see this much passion in writers anymore, so being able to see it so clearly with this fic was such a nice breath of fresh air.

I have to admit, I wasn't Jason's biggest fan at the beginning of the story, but he's really grown on me throughout the series. I especially like his interactions with his team and the other characters. Very well done on his development and progression throughout the story. The plot also seemed to be very good. You clearly had a good, strong idea of what you wanted from this fic and where you wanted it to go.

I would also like to congratulate you on being able to keep all the timelines and universes straight. It's hard to balance so many fandoms (there's like, what, 28 in here?) and you did a very nice job of doing so.

However, may I offer you some well-intentioned constructive criticism?

The story feels pretty rushed to me. There's a lot of information to swallow with very little time to do so before the story jumps to the next plot point. Slow down and take the time to develop characters and locations. A bit more description about new things and characters would go a long way in slowing down the story to a more understandable pace. Description especially would do a lot to improve the quality of the story - for a lot of it, I felt like I was being told the story by a friend, rather than immersing myself in a fictional reality. I've found from experience that the latter makes it easier to understand and love a story than the former.

Also, perhaps slow down with the character intros and fandom inclusions? I don't mean not have them, just slow it down and try to give the readers a chance to familiarize themselves with your versions of the characters? There's a lot of fandoms here and I found it was really easy to get confused and lost with so many being added in such a short amount of time. I counted at least 28 different fandoms and with the story only being a little more than 85,000 words (including authors notes), that doesn't give readers much of a chance to become comfortable with the different fandoms before moving on.

I just think you should keep that in mind. That all being said, I really did like the story overall, and I can't wait to see what the sequel looks like.

Job well done.

Reverse flash is back?! Well, that can't be good.

Great ending. I completely agree about the Anti-Monitor, so I’m glad to see you’ll be more accurate to the comics, where Anti-Monitor defeats Darkseid. Completely agree about Thawne, too. Loved the inclusion of Saracon. Totally wasn’t expecting it!

Looking forward to the sequel.

Awesome story just one question who is saracon is that an oc in arrow or something because the only oc's in arrow I know of are thea,dig,sara, and felicity

Reverse Flash! No kidding! That's awesome!

Pretty awesome chapter.