Reviews for Forty Days in the Wilderness
Guest chapter 16 . 7/8
Hey, thanks for writing this. It's a weird world right now. I hope you get the chance to continue this story and whatever one shots or other writing you put out here.
ButtonMashr chapter 16 . 7/8
Hey Skyrider,

I'm so sorry to hear about the death in your family, and the huge transitions for you lately. It has been so brutal with COVID stuff and work; I'll be rooting for you to find a great position swiftly, and with a minimum of disruptions to life (and everything). Throwing in a potential move on top of that, and yeah - you've got it all going on right now.

I was so encouraged to hear folks say that they are still here supporting writers, and would be here when I returned from emergency hospital stuff, so thank you again for that - and right back at you: take your time, be well, and know that I'll be here anticipating the next chapter but not in any way rushing you. It is worth the wait. :) One shots are fun, too, so I'll be keeping an eye out! :)

-Button
SPARKlingWinter chapter 15 . 6/1
OMG THIS WAS SOOOOOOO GOOD! Will you please continue the storyline? I am dying to know what happens next!
kish99 chapter 15 . 5/4
This was another great chapter from you! This is still the best written Riverdale fanfic I have read! Can't wait to see where the story goes. Stay healthy and safe in these interesting new times :D :D
ButtonMashr chapter 15 . 3/19
You're back! And you were missed, but I'm so glad you had a productive and healing time away from work and structured responsibilities. It has also been neat to see everyone pitch in together to share stories and art and ideas while so many are quarantined!

And yes, writing FP is addicting. :-D I'm also the worst person to ever ask if you've overindulged in mic drop moments (or anything fun, really!), because I tend to encourage new heights at all times... So keep bringing it! :)

I really enjoyed Jughead's reflections on the waiting room, and places meant to be traveled through. That was some great writing!

Mary Andrews is another one who is addicting. Her entrance was superb. :-D (also: "Have you met our children, FP?" :-D)

Awwww, Kevin and Tom were so great together. :)

I really enjoyed Jug and FP discussing Alice, too. The cheeseburgers line had me doing a double-take and laughing. :-D

Oooh, Reese's cups... I had a run-in with some of those a week or so back, and that detail was mildly distracting. :) I also loved FP at the end, with Betty.

I'm really excited to see where things go next, too! Also, that's a generous offer, and my Inbox is also open; it's great that your job can carry on. You sound (more than slightly...) more tech savvy than I am, but my work has transitioned smoothly online as well and I'm very grateful.

Thanks for another great chapter!
AvidMovieFan16 chapter 15 . 3/19
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more.
You take care of yourself now.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/19
Wow! This chapter was worth the wait. It was relieving to see Betty finally with her family and friends. You are an amazing writing.
Boris Yeltsin chapter 15 . 3/19
Loved it. Awesome stuff here. You have all this planned out? If not, maybe I can give you some likely ideas.
VickyP chapter 14 . 2/27
This has been a totally amazing story! There's really nothing like it in the Riverdale world here and I'm so happy I found this! Can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/24
Your story is absolutely amazing! My fave riverdale fanfic I’ve read, I love your writing and can’t wait for you to continue the story. Xxx
ButtonMashr chapter 14 . 12/1/2019
Oh, it was definitely worth the wait. Thanks for posting! Mental health always comes first, too, so I'll be sticking around patiently and sending good thoughts your way. :)

I loved FP stepping in with "out of danger." :) Also - yay for Alice and FP being reunited! I really liked "Edgar! Gun! Intimacy can wait!" :)

Tom got a great mic drop line, too, with Veronica's message - but maybe not quite up there with Alice and the stomach pump line. :)

This was such a fun chapter! Alice getting the shot to save Betty was fantastic, and all of the reactions there at the end were so well done. I'm looking forward to more, but also: fully supportive of breaks and clear heads. I'm always up for messaging, too! :)
ButtonMashr chapter 13 . 12/1/2019
Woo-hoo, a new chapter! :-D (actually - two!) That sounds like a crazy schedule, and I hope it was great, despite being busy. It sounds exciting in any case!

Thanks for the warning to brace myself. :)

The tape recorder was such an effective reveal. That whole scene was so strong, and having Cheryl listen in was a great twist.

FP as sheriff continues to be great in your fic. :) He and Jughead have great chemistry in this chapter, too.

The line about Veronica and the passport made me smile. :) Archie sleeping as his form of processing was a great line as well. :-D

Penelope and Edgar not working together well was not entirely a surprise, but it was dramatic. Nice writing! I also really like the tension in the riot scene.

Betty's on the move! Yay! :) Looking forward to reading part two! :)
Guest chapter 14 . 11/30/2019
OH MY GOD! These chapters we’re well worth the wait. I’m so relieved they finally found her, and a couple times throughout it I didn’t think they would ever be reunited. I hope you have a good break because you definitely deserve it!
guest chapter 13 . 11/30/2019
hi love ur fanfic but I was wondering will Eddie be added cuz he seems really close to Archie.
AvidMovieFan16 chapter 14 . 11/30/2019
I enjoyed the double updates! So Penelope got a taste of her own medicine... Glad to see Polly make an appearance, hopefully she'll go back to normal & that close bond she had with Betty is restored.

Enjoy your vacation & happy holidays!
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